2017 bae synergistic ANS presentation #4
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Thank you for getting a draft to me so promptly. However -- this does not build. I had to make numerous edits to get it to build. Please check these simple things (like the response to "make") before requesting a review. I'm afraid this review is a bit fussy. There were spelling issues, there are too many slides, and generally the slides are not interesting or visual enough. Many things in this presentation could be presented as maps rather than tables, for example -- consider whether any, many, or even all of the tables could be made more visually interesting.
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We should avoid committing aux files which are "generated" rather than "source". To avoid accidentally committing files, avoid use of git add *. Add files intentionally, rather than universally.
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I think this was an attempt to fix building issues.. but apparently it isn't.. I'll get it back up!
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| \newacronym{ANDRA}{ANDRA}{Agence Nationale pour la gestion des D\'echets RAdioactifs, the French National Agency for Radioactive Waste Management} | ||
| \newacronym{ANL}{ANL}{Argonne National Laboratory} | ||
| \newacronym{ANL}{ANL}{Argonne Natio |
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this is an error that surely won't build.
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| \newacronym{AHTR}{AHTR}{Advanced High Temperature Reactor} | ||
| \newacronym{ANDRA}{ANDRA}{Agence Nationale pour la gestion des D\'echets RAdioactifs, the French National Agency for Radioactive Waste Management} | ||
| \newacronym{ANL}{ANL}{Argonne National Laboratory} | ||
| \newacronym{ANL}{ANL}{Argonne Natio | ||
| \newacronym{MTHM}{MTHM}{metric ton of heavy metal}nal Laboratory} |
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continuation of error.... also. MTHM already exists above. Consider sorting the file with your text editor. In vim, it's <ESC>:sort
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| \newacronym{DSNF}{DSNF}{DOE spent nuclear fuel} | |||
| \newacronym{DYMOND}{DYMOND}{Dynamic Model of Nuclear Development } | |||
| \newacronym{EBS}{EBS}{Engineered Barrier System} | |||
| \newacronym{EDF}{EDF}{Électricité de France} | |||
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These unicode characters should not be copy pasted as unicode. Instead, use the latex notation for grave and accent marks. In this case, for the grave:
\newacronym{EDF}{EDF}{\{E}lectricit`{e} de France}`
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| \frametitle{Future Nuclear Projections} | ||
| From the World Nuclear Association \cite{world_nuclear_association_nuclear_2017}. |
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State why you're replicating this table. This slide describes the deployment scheme for the reactors in the simulation and is based in reality. It's input to the simulation.
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"Simulated European Deployment" perhaps
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| Category & Unit & Value & Specifics\\ \hline |
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units should probably come after the value.
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| \frametitle{ Tails and UNF Inventory} |
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Please let me know when this is ready for a re-review. You can do so by @-mentioning me or (I think) by clicking my name in the upper-right reviewers section until the x turns yellow. |
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@katyhuff I was gonna wait until the weekend was over, but if you have time now I think it is ready for a re-review. |
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@jbae11 -- ok, I went to build it and am still getting the error caused by including the acros file twice. |
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I think this looks great! |
Presentation for ANS 2017 Winter conference.