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     <p>Years ago, I made a simple stencil from a paper plate.  Stencils create a form of visual consistency that builds upon itself and can be used over and over again.
     Practically speaking, stencils are a fast and easy way of creating consistent universal visual languages. 
 
-    Spray-paint is a powerful medium, its fast, it doesn't require a studio and certainly doesn't require permisson to create art.
-    And you usually have to be a somewhat audacious person to participate in street art.   Street art is cool, it lives in the real world and it's powerful.
+    Spray-paint is a powerful medium, its fast, it doesn't require studio space, and certainly doesn't require permisson to create art.
+    Usually you have to be a somewhat audacious person to participate in street art.   Street art is cool, it lives in the real world and it's powerful.
 
     That said, wouldn't it be nice if the  platforms where people upload and share their street art were actually cool.  Maybe some day.
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