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guide/sections/part1/data-consumer.adoc

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ property and for the well-being of all nations. Core data is provided on a free
 
 Furthermore, the WMO Unified Data Policy encourages attribution of the source of the data in all cases. In this way, credit is given to those who have expended effort and resources in collecting, curating, generating, or processing the data. Attribution provides visibility of who is using data which, for many organizations, provides necessary evidence to justify continued provision of and updates to the data.
 
-Details of the applicable WMO data policy plus any rights or licenses associated with data are provided in the discovery metadata that accompanies the data. Discovery metadata records are available from the Global Discovery Catalogue.
+Details of the applicable WMO data policy and any rights or licenses associated with data are provided in the discovery metadata that accompanies the data. Discovery metadata records are available from the Global Discovery Catalogue.
 
 The _Manual on WIS_ (WMO-No. 1060), Volume II, Appendix F: WMO Core Metadata Profile 2, section 7.1.17. Properties / WMO data policy provides details on how data policy, rights, and/or licenses are described in the discovery metadata.
 

guide/sections/part1/data-publisher.adoc

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ The following sections cover specific considerations relating to publishing data
 
 ===== Data formats and encodings
 
-Whether providing data as files or through interactive APIs you need to decide which encodings (aka. _data formats_) to use. WMO Technical Regulations may require that data is encoded in particular formats. For example, synoptic observations should be encoded in BUFR. The _Manual on Codes_ (WMO-No. 306) provides details of data formats formally approved for use in WMO. However, Technical Regulations don’t cover all data sharing requirements. In such cases, you should select data formats that are open, non-proprietary, and widely adopted and understood in their target user community. In this context, ‘open’ means that anyone can use the format without needing a license to do so – either to encode data in that format or write software that understands the format.
+Whether providing data as files or through interactive APIs you need to decide which encodings (aka. _data formats_) to use. WMO Technical Regulations may require that data is encoded in particular formats. For example, synoptic observations must be encoded in BUFR. The _Manual on Codes_ (WMO-No. 306) provides details of data formats formally approved for use in WMO. However, Technical Regulations don’t cover all data sharing requirements. In such cases, you should select data formats that are open, non-proprietary, and widely adopted and understood in their target user community. In this context, ‘open’ means that anyone can use the format without needing a license to do so – either to encode data in that format or write software that understands the format.
 
 ===== Providing data as files
 

guide/sections/part2/wis2node.adoc

@@ -84,9 +84,7 @@ A WIS2 Node must be able to:
   * Receive metadata publication errors from the Global Data Catalogue
   * Provide metadata with topics to Global Brokers
 
-===== Provision of system performance metrics
-
-WIS2 Nodes should provide annual performance metrics to their GISC.
+===== System performance metrics
 
 If contacted by the Global Montior via GISC for a performance issue, the WIS2 Node should provide metrics to the GISC and Global Monitor when service is restored to indicate resolution of the issue.