Merge pull request #5063 from wikimedia/update-slides

[YiR] Update slides copy

Wikipedia/Code/YearInReviewCoordinator.swift

@@ -118,11 +118,11 @@ final class YearInReviewCoordinator: NSObject, Coordinator {
     }
 
     var baseSlide4Subtitle: String {
-        let format = WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-base-edits-subtitle", value: "This year, Wikipedia was edited at an average rate of %1$@ times per minute. Articles are collaboratively created and improved using reliable sources. Each edit plays a crucial role in improving and expanding Wikipedia.", comment: "Year in review, collective edits per minute slide subtitle, %1$@ is replaced with the number of edits per minute text, e.g. \"342\"")
+        let format = WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-base-edits-subtitle", value: "This year, Wikipedia was edited at an average rate of %1$@ times per minute. Articles are collaboratively created and improved using reliable sources. All of us have knowledge to share, [learn how to participate.](%2$@)", comment: "Year in review, collective edits per minute slide subtitle, %1$@ is replaced with the number of edits per minute text, e.g. \"342\". %2$@ is replaced with a link to the Mediawiki Apps team FAQ about editing.")
 
         let numEditsPerMinString = formatNumber(342, fractionDigits: 0)
-
-        return String.localizedStringWithFormat(format, numEditsPerMinString)
+        let editingFAQ = "https://www.mediawiki.org/wiki/Special:MyLanguage/Wikimedia_Apps/iOS_FAQ#Editing"
+        return String.localizedStringWithFormat(format, numEditsPerMinString, editingFAQ)
     }
 
     var baseSlide5Title: String {
@@ -358,9 +358,9 @@ final class YearInReviewCoordinator: NSObject, Coordinator {
            nextButtonTitle: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-next", value: "Next", comment: "Year in review next button"),
            finishButtonTitle: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-finish", value: "Finish", comment: "Year in review finish button. Displayed on last slide and dismisses feature view."),
            firstSlideTitle: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-title", value: "Explore your Wikipedia Year in Review", comment: "Year in review page title"),
-           firstSlideSubtitle: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-subtitle", value: "See insights about which articles you read on the Wikipedia app and the edits you made. Share your journey and discover what stood out for you this year. Your reading history is kept protected. Reading insights are calculated using locally stored data on your device.", comment: "Year in review page information"),
+           firstSlideSubtitle: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-subtitle", value: "See insights about which articles you read on the Wikipedia app and the edits you made. Your reading history is kept protected. Reading insights are calculated using locally stored data on your device.", comment: "Year in review page information"),
            firstSlideCTA: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-get-started", value: "Get Started", comment: "Button to continue to year in review"),
-           firstSlideHide: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-hide", value: "Hide this feature", comment: "Button to hide year in review feature"),
+           firstSlideHide: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-start", value: "Learn more", comment: "Button to go to year in review informative page"),
            shareText: WMFLocalizedString("year-in-review-share-text", value: "Here's my Wikipedia Year In Review. Created with the Wikipedia iOS app", comment: "Text shared the Year In Review slides"),
            usernameTitle: CommonStrings.userTitle
        )

Wikipedia/Localizations/en.lproj/Localizable.strings

@@ -1398,7 +1398,7 @@
 "year-in-review-base-donate-title" = "0 ads served on Wikipedia";
 "year-in-review-base-editors-subtitle" = "Wikipedia's community of volunteer editors made more than $1 edits on the iOS app so far this year. The heart and soul of Wikipedia is our global community of volunteer contributors, donors, and billions of readers like yourself – all united to share unlimited access to reliable information.";
 "year-in-review-base-editors-title" = "Editors on the iOS app made more than $1 edits";
-"year-in-review-base-edits-subtitle" = "This year, Wikipedia was edited at an average rate of $1 times per minute. Articles are collaboratively created and improved using reliable sources. Each edit plays a crucial role in improving and expanding Wikipedia.";
+"year-in-review-base-edits-subtitle" = "This year, Wikipedia was edited at an average rate of $1 times per minute. Articles are collaboratively created and improved using reliable sources. All of us have knowledge to share, [learn how to participate.]($2)";
 "year-in-review-base-edits-title" = "Wikipedia was edited $1 times per minute";
 "year-in-review-base-reading-subtitle" = "Wikipedia had $1 million articles across over $2 active languages this year. You joined millions in expanding knowledge and exploring diverse topics.";
 "year-in-review-base-reading-title" = "Reading brought us together";
@@ -1409,7 +1409,6 @@
 "year-in-review-done" = "Done";
 "year-in-review-finish" = "Finish";
 "year-in-review-get-started" = "Get Started";
-"year-in-review-hide" = "Hide this feature";
 "year-in-review-next" = "Next";
 "year-in-review-personalized-donate-subtitle" = "Thank you for supporting Wikipedia and a world where knowledge is free for everyone. Every single edit and donation helps improve people’s access to accurate and reliable information, especially in a rapidly changing world. [Learn more about our work]($1).";
 "year-in-review-personalized-donate-title" = "Thank you for your contribution!";
@@ -1423,7 +1422,8 @@
 "year-in-review-personalized-reading-title- format" = "You read {{PLURAL:$1|$1 article|$1 articles}} this year";
 "year-in-review-share" = "Share";
 "year-in-review-share-text" = "Here's my Wikipedia Year In Review. Created with the Wikipedia iOS app";
-"year-in-review-subtitle" = "See insights about which articles you read on the Wikipedia app and the edits you made. Share your journey and discover what stood out for you this year. Your reading history is kept protected. Reading insights are calculated using locally stored data on your device.";
+"year-in-review-start" = "Learn more";
+"year-in-review-subtitle" = "See insights about which articles you read on the Wikipedia app and the edits you made. Your reading history is kept protected. Reading insights are calculated using locally stored data on your device.";
 "year-in-review-survey-additional-thoughts" = "Any additional thoughts?";
 "year-in-review-survey-neutral" = "Neutral";
 "year-in-review-survey-satisfied" = "Satisfied";

Wikipedia/Localizations/qqq.lproj/Localizable.strings

@@ -1398,7 +1398,7 @@
 "year-in-review-base-donate-title" = "Year in review, donate slide title when user has not made any donations that year.";
 "year-in-review-base-editors-subtitle" = "Year in review, collective edits count slide subtitle, $1 is replaced with the number of edits text, e.g. \"452,257\"";
 "year-in-review-base-editors-title" = "Year in review, collective edits count slide title, $1 is replaced with the number of edits text, e.g. \"452,257\".";
-"year-in-review-base-edits-subtitle" = "Year in review, collective edits per minute slide subtitle, $1 is replaced with the number of edits per minute text, e.g. \"342\"";
+"year-in-review-base-edits-subtitle" = "Year in review, collective edits per minute slide subtitle, $1 is replaced with the number of edits per minute text, e.g. \"342\". $2 is replaced with a link to the Mediawiki Apps team FAQ about editing.";
 "year-in-review-base-edits-title" = "Year in review, collective edits per minute slide title, $1 is replaced with the number of edits per minute text, e.g. \"342\".";
 "year-in-review-base-reading-subtitle" = "Year in review, collective reading count slide subtitle. $1 is replaced with a formatted number of articles available across Wikipedia, e.g. \"63.59\". $2 is replaced with the number of active languages available on Wikipedia, e.g. \"332\"";
 "year-in-review-base-reading-title" = "Year in review, collective reading article count slide title";
@@ -1409,7 +1409,6 @@
 "year-in-review-done" = "Year in review done button";
 "year-in-review-finish" = "Year in review finish button. Displayed on last slide and dismisses feature view.";
 "year-in-review-get-started" = "Button to continue to year in review";
-"year-in-review-hide" = "Button to hide year in review feature";
 "year-in-review-next" = "Year in review next button";
 "year-in-review-personalized-donate-subtitle" = "Year in review, personalized donate slide subtitle for users that donated at least once that year. $1 is replaced with a MediaWiki url with more information about WMF. Do not alter markdown when translating.";
 "year-in-review-personalized-donate-title" = "Year in review, personalized donate slide title for users that donated at least once that year.";
@@ -1423,6 +1422,7 @@
 "year-in-review-personalized-reading-title- format" = "Year in review, personalized reading article count slide title for users that read articles. $1 is replaced with the number of articles the user read.";
 "year-in-review-share" = "Year in review share button";
 "year-in-review-share-text" = "Text shared the Year In Review slides";
+"year-in-review-start" = "Button to go to year in review informative page";
 "year-in-review-subtitle" = "Year in review page information";
 "year-in-review-survey-additional-thoughts" = "Year in review survey placeholder for additional thoughts textfield. Survey is displayed after user has viewed the last slide of their year in review feature.";
 "year-in-review-survey-neutral" = "Year in review survey option 3 text. Survey is displayed after user has viewed the last slide of their year in review feature.";