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changelog/november2024/2024-11-29-dedibox-added-dedibox-commitment-plans.mdx

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-title: Dedibox Commitment Plans
+title: Dedibox commitment plans
 status: added
 author:
     fullname: 'Join the #dedibox-servers channel on Slack.'
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ category: bare-metal
 product: dedibox
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-By committing on new servers or your existing servers, you can now benefit from a discount on the monthly price according to the time of commitment.
+By committing to new or existing servers, you can now benefit from a discount on the monthly price according to the time of commitment.
 
-_More info on the <Link to=https://www.scaleway.com/en/pricing/dedibox-options/#dedibox-commitment-plans>Dedibox pricing page</Link>._ 
+Refer to the dedicated [pricing page](https://www.scaleway.com/en/pricing/dedibox-options/#dedibox-commitment-plans) for more information.