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Co-authored-by: Chris L <[email protected]>

project/audience.md

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 # For whom?
 
-The LOAMA project is created for users with a technological knowledge, but we've focused on several factors while designing the application:
+The LOAMA project is created for users with a technological background, but we've focused on several factors while designing the application:
 - **Ease of use**: LOAMA was designed with ease of use in mind by reducing & simplifying the steps that need to be taken to assign permissions. 
-- **Accessibiliy**: In order to make LOAMA as accessible as possible, we omitted using technical terms to describe function. Instead, by using a combination of icons, simple sentences and colors, we indicate the status of files and divert attention of the user.
+- **Accessibiliy**: To make LOAMA as accessible as possible, we omitted using technical terms to describe functions. Instead, by using a combination of icons, simple sentences and colours, we indicate the status of files and divert the attention of the user.
 
 By using the information gained during the [brand creation](/project/brand.md), we made a persona to guide us during the design process of [Loama](/loama/index.md):
 
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 - I can't see what permissions are configured for the files in my pod
 - I don't see who can access my files and which permissions they have
 - What do the permissions actually mean within my Solid Pod?
-- Why should I use Solid over other technologies or just having a company have my data?
+- Why should I use Solid over other technologies or just letting a company have my data?
 
 #### Solid-enabled apps
 - What do the permissions actually mean within my Solid Pod?
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 ### Needs
 > What does the users want to do within the app?
 #### LOAMA
-- I want to see what data an person, company or application can access
+- I want to see what data a person, company or application can access
 - I want to see when my data was accessed
 - I want to revoke or allow acess to my data
-- I want to understand what the permissions means and the effect of when I allow them
+- I want to understand what the permissions mean and the effect of allowing them
 
 #### Solid-enabled apps
 - I want to use my data in my Solid pod across different platforms
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 - I want to be in control of my own data
 - I want to share the same data across platforms
-- I want to easily disabled shared access to sensitive information
+- I want to easily revoke access to sensitive information
 - I want to manage my permissions in a centralized application, not across different platforms

project/brand.md

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 For the project, we made an appropriate branding that is based on the [SOLID logo](https://solidproject.org). We did this by using several branding techniques commonly used to create a brand from scratch.
 
 ## 1. Personifying the product
-In order to differentiate our brand from Solid, we trying personifying our product by asking some thought-provoking questions:
-- If our product was a person, what would they wear to a party, how would they act on the party and what would be their favorite music?
-- If we need to associate our product with a season, what would this be?
+To differentiate our brand from Solid, we tried personifying our product by asking some thought-provoking questions:
+- If our product was a person, what would they wear to a party, how would they act at the party and what would be their favorite music?
+- If we had to associate our product with a season, which would it be?
 
 ## 2. Term association
 In order to find out which things or terms we associated with our product, we created a mindmap with terms that we associate with our product and objects we associate with those terms.
 
 ![LOAMA Mindmap](../images/loama-mindmap.png)
 
-This gave us more insight in what we could use as a basis for naming our product. 
+This gave us more insight into what we could use as a basis for naming our product. 
 
 ## 3. Name
 The name LOAMA is an acrynom:
 > **L**inked **O**pen **A**ccess **M**anagement **A**pp 
 
-It's a technical way to describe our project, but the acronym *(Loama)* was an unexpected inspiration for our brand, as it became a basis for which we build our brand, crest and color palette.
+It's a technical way to describe our project, but the acronym *(Loama)* was an unexpected inspiration for our project's identity, as it became a basis for which we build our brand, crest and color palette.
 
 ![Loama Crest](/loama-logo.svg)
 
 ## 4. Typography & Color Usage
-During the design process, we research and define a typography & color palette in order to have a consistent look & feel through the project. These elements were re-used within the design prototype, presentations, live demos and documentation.
+During the design process, we researched and defined a typography & color palette in order to have a consistent look & feel through the project. These elements were re-used within the design prototype, presentations, live demos and documentation.
 
 ![Color Palette LOAMA](../images/color-palette.png)
 
-For our font, we've decided to use a monospace font *([Jetbrains Mono](https://www.jetbrains.com/lp/mono/))* for headers, wordmark or highlight text. This allowed us to give of an technological feeling and worked great in creating a contrast with our sans-serif font.
+For our font, we've decided to use a monospace font *([Jetbrains Mono](https://www.jetbrains.com/lp/mono/))* for headers, wordmark or highlighted text. This allows us to emit a technological feeling and worked great in creating a contrast with our sans-serif font.
 
 Our standard / sans-serif font of choice is the [Raleyway font](https://www.theleagueofmoveabletype.com/raleway), as it already has a usage: It's the main font style of the Solid project. Because of this, our project has a strong correlation to Solid, but can differentiate itself by using the mono font.