Copyedits openlibhums/consortial_billing#86

openlibhums · Nov 21, 2024 · 9333d89 · 9333d89
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diff --git a/templates/custom/recommend-us-confirm-sent.html b/templates/custom/recommend-us-confirm-sent.html
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ <h2 class="text-white">Thank you for supporting open access.</h2>
       diamond open access so far, saving university libraries an estimated £33.9
       million since 2015. By recommending us to your librarian, you are helping to keep
       knowledge free. Thank you.</p>
-      <p>One more thing... Please share this page on social media so others
-      recommend us.</p>
+      <p>One more thing... Please share this page on social media to help us
+      keep knowledge free.</p>
     </div>
     {% component_block "button_group" %}
       {% component_block "button" name="general" id=copy_pid type="button" %}

diff --git a/templates/custom/recommend-us.html b/templates/custom/recommend-us.html
@@ -20,21 +20,36 @@
 {% endblock meta_description %}
 
 {% block body %}
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+
+
   <div class="container mx-auto max-w-screen-xl">
     <div class="relative max-lg:mt-56 lg:mt-8">
       {% include 'custom/edit-on-github.html' with rel_path='custom/recommend-us.html' %}
       {% include "custom/typewriter-opener.html" %}
       {% include 'custom/generic-h1.html' with h1="Recommend<br> us." %}
     </div>
     <div class="relative">
+      {% component_block "page_intro" %}
+        {% fill "column_one" %}
+          <p class="lead text-white">Like what we do? Help us to keep knowledge
+          free.</p>
+        {% endfill %}
+        {% fill "column_two" %}
+          <p>Use this quick tool to generate a personalised email to your
+          library to recommend they join the OLH, or thank them for being a
+          supporter.</p>
+        {% endfill %}
+      {% endcomponent_block %}
+    </div>
+    <div class="relative mt-28">
       {% get_uuid4 as aria_controls %}
       {% component_block "timeline_section" alternate="odd" step=step bg="bg-blue" prose=False %}
         {% component_block "form" form_method="POST" notify_required=False default_button=False %}
           <input hidden name="previous_step" value="{{ step }}">
           <div class="prose lg:prose-lg text-white">
             <h2 class="text-white">Check if your library supports the OLH.</h2>
-            <p>We can create an email for you to send if they
-            are not members yet.</p>
+            <p>First, enter the name of your institution below.</p>
           </div>
           {% component_block "form_field" id_for_label="search_supporter" label="Institution name" required=True %}
             {% component "form_input" type="search" id="search_supporter" name="supporter_query" %}