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-				I am a technology and business strategy professional with 15+ years of experience building and launching user-centered products and services, many related to public transportation.
+				I am a product, strategy and technology leader with 15+ years of experience building and launching products and services in public spaces.
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+			<p>My work often includes customer experience, "smart cities", the Internet of Things (IoT), govtech/transit tech, and out of home advertising&mdash;I'm particularly interested in sustainability and mobility. 
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-				Founder of <a href="http://www.publicworksoffice.com" target="_blank">Public Works Office</a>.
+				Founder and Principal Consultant at <a href="http://www.publicworksoffice.com" target="_blank">Public Works Office</a>.
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-				When I'm not at work, you can find me renovating an <a href="https://www.instagram.com/casafriski" target="_blank">1876 townhome in Philadelphia</a>.
+				When not working, you can find me renovating an <a href="https://www.instagram.com/casafriski" target="_blank">1876 townhome in Philadelphia</a>.
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-				<li><a href="mailto:[email protected]" target="_blank">E-Mail</a></li>
 				<li><a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/jeffreymaki" target="_blank">LinkedIn</a></li>
+				<li><a href="mailto:[email protected]" target="_blank">E-Mail</a></li>
 				<li><a href="https://www.github.com/jeffmaki" target="_blank">GitHub</a></li>
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