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Group 2 - refactoring library class #14

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print(f"Author: {max.authors}")
print(f"Duration: {max.duration}")
print(f"______________________________")
return str(max)
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The method should either return the book, or it should print the book to the console but not both.

max = b
# end if
# end if
else:
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The else branch is not needed, because it does not perform any special functionality.

pass
# end else
# end for

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There is no check that a book was found! If no book was found, accessing the book member variables would throw an error.

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if longest_book is not None:
print(f"Title: {max.title}")
print(f"Author: {max.authors}")
print(f"Duration: {max.duration}")
print(f"______________________________")

# Prints crime audio books
def print_longest_crime_audio_book(self) -> str:
crime_audio_books: list[Book] = []
max: Optional[Book] = None
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The max variable does not really tell us what this variable should be holding. Renaming it to longest_book would make it clearer

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max: Optional[Book] = None
longest_book: Optional[Book] = None

max: Optional[Book] = None

# print banner
print("*********************************************")
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This will printed even if no book was found. Should maybe be inside the a condition.

return str(max)

# Constructor
def __init__(self, books: list[Book]):
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Constructor and member variables should be at the top of the class and commented

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