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diff --git a/Dark-Patterns.md b/Dark-Patterns.md
diff --git a/evaluations/ownership/interoperability.yaml b/evaluations/ownership/interoperability.yaml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ criterias:
           The manufacturer does not use software, copyright, or other devices to
           restrict the use of products and services that would otherwise be
           possible to use with your existing products (e.g., set-top boxes,
-          third party applications, etc.).
+          third-party applications, etc.).
         procedures:
           - |+
 

diff --git a/evaluations/ownership/process-for-terms-of-service-enforcement.yaml b/evaluations/ownership/process-for-terms-of-service-enforcement.yaml
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ testName: Process for terms of service enforcement
 criterias:
   - criteriaName: >-
       I know how, when, and why the company or organization unilaterally closes
-      user account sand/or restricts access to services.
+      user accounts and/or restricts access to services.
     indicators:
       - indicator: >-
           The company or organization clearly explains what types of activities

diff --git a/evaluations/ownership/transparency-about-terms-of-service-enforcement.yaml b/evaluations/ownership/transparency-about-terms-of-service-enforcement.yaml
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ criterias:
 
           The company or organization publishes data about the number of
           accounts it restricts or closes as a result of a request from private
-          third-parties.
+          third parties.
 
 
           The company or organization clearly discloses that it notifies users

diff --git a/evaluations/privacy/data-control.yaml b/evaluations/privacy/data-control.yaml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ criterias:
   - criteriaName: I can see and control everything the company knows about me.
     indicators:
       - indicator: >-
-          The definition of 'user information' includes information collected from third-parties.
+          The definition of 'user information' includes information collected from third parties.
           
          
           Users can control the collection of their information.

diff --git a/evaluations/privacy/data-retention-and-deletion.yaml b/evaluations/privacy/data-retention-and-deletion.yaml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ criterias:
     indicators:
       - indicator: >-
           The company on its own deletes outdated and unnecessary personal
-          information, or renders that data to be reasonably deidentified.
+          information, or renders that data to be reasonably de-identified.
           
           The company provides specific retention periods for different types of
           information that are reasonably scoped to get rid of outdated and

diff --git a/evaluations/privacy/data-sharing.yaml b/evaluations/privacy/data-sharing.yaml
@@ -3,8 +3,7 @@ criterias:
   - criteriaName: Data sharing is reasonably scoped and transparent.
     indicators:
       - indicator: |-
-          The company only shares information with third parties as is reasonably necessary to deliver service to
-          consumers.
+          The company only shares information with third parties as is reasonably necessary to deliver service to consumers.
           
           The company clearly discloses what user information it shares with whom.
 
@@ -14,14 +13,14 @@ criterias:
 
           The company clearly discloses whether it shares user information with government or legal authorities.
           
-          Third party domains contacted by the product are named in the privacy policy.
+          Third-party domains contacted by the product are named in the privacy policy.
         
         procedures:
           - |-
             Investigation and analysis of publicly available documentation to
             determine what the company clearly discloses.
             
-            Analyze network traffic to see what third party domains are
+            Analyze network traffic to see what third-party domains are
             contacted by the product.
 
-readinessFlag: '1'
+readinessFlag: '1'
diff --git a/evaluations/privacy/data-use.yaml b/evaluations/privacy/data-use.yaml
@@ -3,8 +3,7 @@ criterias:
   - criteriaName: Data usage is consistent with the context of the relationship with the user and is transparent.
     indicators:
       - indicator: |-
-          The company puts limits on the use of my data that are consistent with the purpose for which the data is
-          collected.
+          The company puts limits on the use of my data that are consistent with the purpose for which the data is collected.
           
           The company explicitly discloses every way in which it uses my data.
 

diff --git a/evaluations/privacy/minimal-data-collection.yaml b/evaluations/privacy/minimal-data-collection.yaml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ criterias:
             Decline permissions not relevant to the product's functionality,
             verify that product is still functional.
       - indicator: >-
-          Manufacturer does not discriminate or other provide a lower level of
+          Manufacturer does not discriminate or otherwise provide a lower level of
           service if a consumer exercises privacy rights or does not consent
           to unnecessary secondary data collection or use.
         procedures:

diff --git a/evaluations/security/authentication.yaml b/evaluations/security/authentication.yaml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ criterias:
         procedures:
           - Create an account and look for settings to enable MFA.
 
-      - indicator: For products that handle sufficiently sensitive data, users can choose to use multi-factor authentication whenever product is activated, or when a device is unreckognized.
+      - indicator: For products that handle sufficiently sensitive data, users can choose to use multi-factor authentication whenever product is activated, or when a device is unrecognized.
         procedures:
           - Create an account, enable MFA, and try using product multiple times on one device to see if MFA is required each time.
           - Create an account, enable MFA, and try using product multiple times on different devices to see if MFA is required each time.

diff --git a/evaluations/security/best-build-practices.yaml b/evaluations/security/best-build-practices.yaml
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ criterias:
 
             What is the branch density?
 
-            How many stack adjusts, function calls, etc are there?
+            How many stack adjusts, function calls, etc. are there?
 
             How complex is the code?
 

diff --git a/evaluations/security/known-exploit-resistance.yaml b/evaluations/security/known-exploit-resistance.yaml
@@ -62,6 +62,6 @@ criterias:
 
             Examine file system, database, and logs to determine if sensitive
             information is stored in a way that could lead to compromise of user
-            data."
+            data.
 
 readinessFlag: '2'
diff --git a/evaluations/security/security-oversight.yaml b/evaluations/security/security-oversight.yaml
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ criterias:
           The company commissions third-party security audits on its products
           and services.
 
-          The company ensures that third-parties who process data on behalf of the company
+          The company ensures that third parties who process data on behalf of the company
           implement the required technical and organizational measures to protect user data.
         procedures:
           - >-