content/en/bluehats.njk: Minor rephrasing

codegouvfr · Sep 21, 2023 · 9af3a14 · 9af3a14
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@@ -10,10 +10,10 @@ eleventyNavigation:
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       <h1><code>BlueHats</code>, who's in ?</h1>
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-	The <code>BlueHats</code> are all the people who want to show that they contribute to Free and Open Source software developed and/or used by public agencies <strong>across the world</strong>: public servants involved in the use and development of these software, of course, but also citizens who recognize that their actions for Free Software help the administration's projects.
+	The <code>BlueHats</code> are all the people who want to show that they contribute to Free and Open Source software developed and/or used by public administrations <strong>all over the world</strong>: civil servants involved in the use and development of these software, of course, but also citizens who recognise that their actions in favour of Free Software help the administration's projects.
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-	<code>BlueHats</code> is <em>not</em> a product or brand of the French Free Software unit.  It's a global movement to which our unit contributes by publishing a <a href="/fr/bluehats/tags/gazette/">newsletter in French</a>, organizing <a href="/fr/bluehats/tags/atelier/">online workshops</a>, and <a href="/fr/bluehats/tags/rencontre/">in-person meetings</a>.  All public agencies across the world are invited to contribute to this movement!
+	<code>BlueHats</code> is <em>not</em> a product or a brand of the French Free Software unit. It's a global movement to which our unit contributes by publishing a <a href="/fr/bluehats/tags/gazette/">newsletter in French</a>, organising <a href="/fr/bluehats/tags/atelier/">online workshops</a> and <a href="/fr/bluehats/tags/rencontre/">face-to-face meetings</a>. All public administrations around the world are invited to contribute to this movement!
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       <h2><code>BlueHats events</code></h2>
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-	You can start by organizing <code>BlueHats</code> events inviting people to support Free Software in the public sector by sharing their expertise, hacking, etc.  Events do not need to be big hackathongs: even small IRL meetings are useful.
+	You can start by organising <code>BlueHats</code> events, inviting people to support Free Software in the public sector by sharing their expertise, hacking, etc.  Events do not have to be big hackathons: even small face-to-face meetings are useful.
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       <h2><code>BlueHats online workshops</code></h2>
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-	As a civil servant, you can share your expertise on Free Software easily via online workshops, inviting other civil servants.
+	As a civil servant, you can easily share your expertise on Free Software through online workshops to which you can invite other civil servants.
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       <h2><code>BlueHats newsletters</code></h2>
       <p>
-	If your administration is willing to commit to spread information about the pogress of Free Software in the public sector, it can publish a newsletter.
+	If your administration is willing to commit to spreading information about the progress of Free Software in the public sector, it can publish a newsletter.
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