feat: reduce the amount of copy on the home page & improve other text

akarras · Nov 19, 2023 · 2fea9f4 · 2fea9f4
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diff --git a/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/components/select.rs b/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/components/select.rs
@@ -1,4 +1,7 @@
-use leptos::{html::{Div, Input}, *};
+use leptos::{
+    html::{Div, Input},
+    *,
+};
 #[cfg(feature = "hydrate")]
 use leptos_use::use_element_hover;
 

diff --git a/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/components/world_picker.rs b/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/components/world_picker.rs
@@ -13,8 +13,14 @@ pub fn WorldOnlyPicker(
         .0;
     match local_worlds {
         Ok(worlds) => {
-            let data = create_memo(move |_| worlds.iter().filter_map(|w| w.as_world()).cloned().collect::<Vec<_>>());
-            view!{
+            let data = create_memo(move |_| {
+                worlds
+                    .iter()
+                    .filter_map(|w| w.as_world())
+                    .cloned()
+                    .collect::<Vec<_>>()
+            });
+            view! {
                 <Select items=data.into()
                 as_label=move |w| w.name.clone()
                 choice=current_world

diff --git a/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/routes/home_page.rs b/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/routes/home_page.rs
@@ -27,25 +27,23 @@ pub fn HomePage() -> impl IntoView {
             </div>
             <div class="flex flex-col">
                 <h1 class="text-3xl">"Ultros Alpha"</h1>
-                <Title text="Ultros The Ultra Fast Market Tool"/>
-                <div>
-                    <div class="flex p-8 flex-col md:flex-row">
-                        <ul>
-                            <h2 class="text-3xl p-1">"Fast Prices"</h2>
-                            <ul class="list-disc text-xl p-2">
-                                <li>"fastest search in the west"</li>
-                                <li>"view associated recipes with an item and the price to craft it"</li>
-                                <li>"explore prices to buy job gear quickly and easily, for example- "<A href="/items/jobset/SAM">"all Samurai gear"</A></li>
-                            </ul>
+                <Title text="Ultros: The Ultra Fast Market Tool"/>
+                <div class="p-8 flex flex-col md:flex-row">
+                    <div class="flex flex-col">
+                        <h2 class="text-3xl p-1">"Fast Prices"</h2>
+                        <ul class="list-disc text-xl p-2">
+                            <li>"Fastest search in the west"</li>
+                            <li>"View associated recipes and crafting costs"</li>
+                            <li>"Explore prices for job gear, e.g., "<A href="/items/jobset/SAM">"all Samurai gear"</A></li>
                         </ul>
                     </div>
                 </div>
                 <div class="p-8 grow flex-auto flex flex-col md:flex-row">
                     <div class="flex flex-col">
                         <span class="text-3xl p-1">"Analyzer"</span>
                         <ul class="list-disc text-xl p-2">
-                            <li>"Make tons of gil with market arbitrage, find items cheap on other worlds and resell on yours"</li>
-                            <li>"Quickly filter by roi, profit, and estimated sale date"</li>
+                            <li>"Profit from market arbitrage"</li>
+                            <li>"Filter by ROI, profit, and estimated sale date"</li>
                         </ul>
                     </div>
                     <div class="flex md:ml-20 flex-col text-right align-top">
@@ -59,7 +57,7 @@ pub fn HomePage() -> impl IntoView {
                         <CharacterRetainerList character=None retainers=vec![(Retainer {
                             id: 0,
                             world_id: 9,
-                            name: "Retainer 1".to_string(),
+                            name: "your-best-retainer".to_string(),
                             retainer_city_id: 1
                         }, vec![ActiveListing {
                             id: 0,
@@ -83,7 +81,6 @@ pub fn HomePage() -> impl IntoView {
                     </div>
                     <div class="flex flex-col p-8 h-full w-full bg-gradient-to-br from-[#100a13] to-transparent">
                         <span class="text-3xl p-1">"Retainers"</span>
-                        <br/>
                         <ul class="list-disc text-xl p-2">
                             <li>"Track your retainer's listings online"</li>
                             <li>"View undercut items in one place"</li>
@@ -93,21 +90,19 @@ pub fn HomePage() -> impl IntoView {
                 </div>
                 <div class="p-8 grow">
                     <span class="content-title">"Lists"</span>
-                    <br/>
-                    <ul>
-                        <li>"Make shopping lists and find the cheapest prices"</li>
+                    <ul class="list-disc text-xl p-2">
+                        <li>"Create shopping lists with the best prices"</li>
                         <li>"Import entire recipes"</li>
-                        <li>"Honestly not as good as Teamcraft, but maybe it'll be better one day"</li>
+                        <li>"Ongoing improvements for a better experience"</li>
                     </ul>
                 </div>
                 <Ad />
                 <div class="p-8 flex flex-col md:flex-row">
                     <div class="flex flex-col p-2">
                         <span class="content-title">"Discord Bot"</span>
-                        <br/>
                         <ul>
-                            <li>"Use many features of the site through a Discord bot"</li>
-                            <li>"Get alerts via notifications through the bot"</li>
+                            <li>"Use site features through a Discord bot"</li>
+                            <li>"Receive alerts via bot notifications"</li>
                         </ul>
                     </div>
                     <a class="flex flex-col p-4 bg-slate-950 text-lg rounded-md b-solid border-2 border-violet-950 text-white items-center text-center ml-10" href="/invitebot">

diff --git a/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/routes/settings.rs b/ultros-frontend/ultros-app/src/routes/settings.rs
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ fn HomeWorldPicker() -> impl IntoView {
             <span>"The home world will default for the analyzer and several other pages"</span>
             <label class="text-lg">"default price zone"</label>
             <WorldPicker current_world=price_region set_current_world=set_price_region />
-            <span>"The price zone is where each price will be shown"</span>
+            <span>"what world/region to show prices by default for within search/"<a href="/items">"items"</a>" pages"</span>
         </div>
     </div>}
 }