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Hello @ShyamPraveenSingh, thank you for your contribution. It is well put together and I like how you structure information. Unfortunately, there are some things you could adress. Mainly, our plagiarms check found snippets of your texts on other websites. We can not use your article containing these snippets, it would hurt all articles on Knowledgebase. Could you please give it a look? I trust your writing abilities.
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| Responsibility is not for everyone. But it’s a powerful and deeply rewarding ship to navigate once embarked. | ||
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Please, add the image into the files folder (https://github.com/DXHeroes/knowledge-base-content/tree/master/files)
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| - **Start by Talking**: The first step is to talk to the individuals concerned | ||
| - **Ensure Adequate Resources**: A sensible action is to ensure that your people have the resources they need to do their job . This might include providing training, equipment, access to mentors and coaches , and suchlike. |
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I am sorry, our plagiarism check found the same text in a mindtools article. The mentioned text is: A sensible early action is to ensure that your people have the resources they need to do their job . This might include providing training, equipment, access to mentors and coaches, and suchlike. Could you please rewrite it or rephrase it?
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| Being responsible brings us many benefits. It can help us achieve our goals and objectives in any area of our life. Responsibility allows us to create principles, morals and helps us to lead your life. Being a responsible person helps us to: | ||
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| **Be more independent:** Assuming the consequences of our actions will help us make better decisions. |
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From the cognifit article: Be more independent: Assuming the consequences of our actions will help us make better decisions.
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| Being responsible brings us many benefits. It can help us achieve our goals and objectives in any area of our life. Responsibility allows us to create principles, morals and helps us to lead your life. Being a responsible person helps us to: | ||
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| **Be more independent:** Assuming the consequences of our actions will help us make better decisions. | ||
| **Be more reliable**: By being responsible, we gain other's trust and we will also gain confidence in ourselves |
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From the cognifit article:Be more reliable: By being responsible, we gain other’s trust and we will also gain confidence in ourselves. Doing the right thing will make us feel good. And even if we are wrong, we will be satisfied because we know that we have done our best.
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| **Be more independent:** Assuming the consequences of our actions will help us make better decisions. | ||
| **Be more reliable**: By being responsible, we gain other's trust and we will also gain confidence in ourselves | ||
| **Be more honest:** When we tend to tell the truth and keep our promises, the people around us will believe us and see us as an honest person. |
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From the same cofnigit article: Be more honest: When we tend to tell the truth and keep our promises, the people around us will believe us and see us as an honest person.
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| ## What Is Responsibility | ||
| Responsibility is the combination of two words: **Response + ability**. It also means taking on more risk and therefore reward because it involves a degree of success and failure beyond oneself. People are responsible for themselves and so when failure happens, you are just failing yourself. When you choose to take on responsibilities beyond yourself, you are agreeing to take the interests of others into your hands in trying to do more, be more, and allow others to benefit from your being responsible. |
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Unfortunately, our plagiarms check found similar text on Quora (https://www.quora.com/What-is-responsibility). The text in questions is from Blair Capel: Responsibility means taking on more risk and therefore reward because it involves a degree of success and failure beyond oneself. People are responsible for themselves and so when failure happens, you are just failing yourself. When you choose to take on responsibilities beyond yourself, you are agreeing to take the interests of others into your hands in trying to do more, be more, and allow others to benefit from your being responsible.
Responsibility is not for everyone. But it’s a powerful and deeply rewarding ship to navigate once embarked.
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Hello @ShyamPraveenSingh, please, don't feel sorry. I will update the contributing guide to reflect that there are some articles we can not accept. You were unaware of it and that is my responsibility. This is a learning experience for all of us — which is great! That is the correct spirit of Hacktoberfest. Take as long as you want. If I can help you in any way, shape or form, let me know. |
Thank you so much for your kind and motivating words. |
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Hi @ridlees, I have re-written the article can you please review it. |
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Hello @ShyamPraveenSingh, I will go through the changes right now. Don't worry about the error, there was an error on our hosting server, but it should be fixed by now. |
Sure! Thank you. |
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Hello @ShyamPraveenSingh, you did amazing work. Let's resolve the remaining conversations together so we can move into the next step, right?
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| ## Resources for Responsibility | ||
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Do you think this and the next resource are good points for further reading?
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Sure I will make these changes soon and get back to you shortly. |
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Hi @ridlees, I have made the suggested changes so can you look into it. |
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Thanks for the work. Please, add the source for the image. With that, I am approving the message. @prokopsimek could you give it a look?
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I am done adding the source of the images used. |
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Please use relative links.
@ridlees Could you check grammar? Grammarly reports some issues in the article.
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| [Your Response Is Your Responsibility](https://shiftyourfamilybusiness.com/2018/05/20/your-response-is-your-responsibility/) |
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| [How to Hold Productive and Enjoyable Meetings](https://blog.bonus.ly/productive-and-enjoyable-meetings) |
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I have made the changes. |
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@ShyamPraveenSingh You have force-pushed my changes, please apply them. |
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Hi @prokopsimek, Can you please look into it. I have made the required changes. |
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