Bugfix: More Text Fixes

resources/dicts/backstories.json

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
       "kittypet1", "kittypet2", "kittypet3", "kittypet4", "refugee3", "tragedy_survivor3", "guided1", "refugee6"
     ],
     "former_clancat_backstories": [
-      "otherclan1", "otherclan2", "otherclan3", "ostracized_warrior", "disgraced1", "disgraced2", "disgraced3", "retired_leader", "refugee1", "tragedy_survivor1", "medicine_cat", "guided4", "refugee5"
+      "otherclan1", "otherclan2", "otherclan3", "otherclan4", "ostracized_warrior", "disgraced1", "disgraced2", "disgraced3", "retired_leader", "refugee1", "tragedy_survivor1", "medicine_cat", "guided4", "refugee5"
     ],
     "healer_backstories": [
       "medicine_cat", "wandering_healer1", "wandering_healer2"
@@ -137,4 +137,4 @@
     "outsider": "outsider1"
   }
 
-}
+}

resources/dicts/patrols/forest/training/greenleaf.json

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
             "all apprentices": [-1, -1]
         },
         "weight": 20,
-        "intro_text": "p_l thinks r_c is, well, really, just - uh, just swell, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/think/thinks} r_c might like {PRONOUN/p_l/object} too. {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been building up {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} confidence, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'re/'s} going to ask {PRONOUN/r_c/object} to spend some time together, just the two of them, this afternoon!",
+        "intro_text": "p_l thinks r_c is, well, really, just - uh, just swell, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/think/thinks} r_c might like {PRONOUN/p_l/object} too. {PRONOUN/p_l/subject/CAP}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been building up {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} confidence, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'re/'s} going to ask {PRONOUN/r_c/object} to spend some time together, just the two of them, this afternoon!",
         "decline_text": "Unfortunately, r_c is sent on an afternoon border patrol before p_l can say anything.",
         "chance_of_success": 60,
         "relationship_constraint": ["romantic_20", "not_mates"],
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
                 ]
             },
             {
-                "text": "All p_l's bravery is rewarded when r_c says yes! The pair head out for their romantic stroll, the buzz of excitement in their hearts merging with the buzz of life in the green-lit forest, shyly sharing glances between one another.",
+                "text": "All of p_l's bravery is rewarded when r_c says yes! The pair head out for their romantic stroll, the buzz of excitement in their hearts merging with the buzz of life in the green-lit forest, shyly sharing glances between one another.",
                 "exp": 20,
                 "weight": 5,
                 "relationships": [

resources/dicts/patrols/forest/training/leaf-fall.json

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
             "all apprentices": [-1, -1]
         },
         "weight": 20,
-        "intro_text": "p_l thinks r_c is, well, really, just - uh, just swell, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/think/thinks} r_c might like {PRONOUN/p_l/object} too. {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been building up {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} confidence, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'re/'s} going to ask {PRONOUN/r_c/object} to spend some time together, just the two of them, this afternoon!",
+        "intro_text": "p_l thinks r_c is, well, really, just - uh, just swell, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/think/thinks} r_c might like {PRONOUN/p_l/object} too. {PRONOUN/p_l/subject/CAP}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been building up {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} confidence, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'re/'s} going to ask {PRONOUN/r_c/object} to spend some time together, just the two of them, this afternoon!",
         "decline_text": "Unfortunately, r_c is sent on an afternoon border patrol before p_l can say anything.",
         "chance_of_success": 60,
         "relationship_constraint": ["romantic_20", "not_mates"],
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
     "max_cats": 6,
     "min_max_status": {
         "apprentice": [2, 4],
-        "normal adult": [2,4]
+        "normal adult": [2, 4]
     },
     "weight": 20,
     "intro_text": "The leaves drift high in sunset piles beneath the shedding trees, and as the patrol wanders familiar forest paths, app1 gets swallowed up.",
@@ -219,15 +219,15 @@
     "max_cats": 6,
     "min_max_status": {
         "apprentice": [2, 4],
-        "normal adult": [2,2]
+        "normal adult": [2, 2]
     },
     "weight": 20,
     "intro_text": "The leaves drift high in sunset piles beneath the shedding trees, and as the patrol wanders familiar forest paths, app1 gets swallowed up.",
     "decline_text": "app1 reappears soon enough, a bright red leaf plastered to {PRONOUN/app1/poss} forehead.",
     "chance_of_success": 60,
     "success_outcomes": [
         {
-            "text": "app1 leaps out of the leaf drift, sending p_l falling into r_c as {PRONOUN/app1/subject} {VERB/app1/leap/leaps} onwards to bowl app2 into yet more leaves. The two apprentices descend into furious mock combat, yowling with excitement, as p_l gazes up at r_c in bewilderment.",
+            "text": "app1 leaps out of the leaf drift, sending p_l falling into r_c as {PRONOUN/app1/subject} {VERB/app1/leap/leaps} onwards to bowl app2 into yet more leaves. The two apprentices descend into furious mock combat, yowling with excitement, as r_c gazes up at p_l in bewilderment.",
             "exp": 10,
             "weight": 20,
             "relationships": [
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@
     "max_cats": 6,
     "min_max_status": {
         "apprentice": [2, 2],
-        "normal adult": [2,4]
+        "normal adult": [2, 4]
     },
     "weight": 20,
     "intro_text": "The leaves drift high in sunset piles beneath the shedding trees, and as the patrol wanders familiar forest paths, app1 gets swallowed up.",

resources/dicts/patrols/forest/training/newleaf.json

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
             "all apprentices": [-1, -1]
         },
         "weight": 20,
-        "intro_text": "p_l thinks r_c is, well, really, just - uh, just swell, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/think/thinks} r_c might like {PRONOUN/p_l/object} too. {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been building up {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} confidence, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'re/'s} going to ask {PRONOUN/r_c/object} to spend some time together, just the two of them, this afternoon!",
+        "intro_text": "p_l thinks r_c is, well, really, just - uh, just swell, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/think/thinks} r_c might like {PRONOUN/p_l/object} too. {PRONOUN/p_l/subject/CAP}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been building up {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} confidence, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'re/'s} going to ask {PRONOUN/r_c/object} to spend some time together, just the two of them, this afternoon!",
         "decline_text": "Unfortunately, r_c is sent on an afternoon border patrol before p_l can say anything.",
         "chance_of_success": 60,
         "relationship_constraint": ["romantic_20", "not_mates"],
@@ -119,13 +119,13 @@
             "all apprentices": [-1, -1]
         },
         "weight": 20,
-        "intro_text": "p_l trots up, full of a disproportionate amount of excitement for the bland, overcast afternoon, tail tip twitching. Does r_c want to come out with {PRONOUN/p_l/object}? {PRONOUN/p_l/subject/cap} lean in close - there's a special spot {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been meaning to show {PRONOUN/r_c/subject}.",
+        "intro_text": "p_l trots up, full of a disproportionate amount of excitement for the bland, overcast afternoon, tail tip twitching. Does r_c want to come out with {PRONOUN/p_l/object}? {PRONOUN/p_l/subject/CAP} {VERB/p_l/lean/leans} in close - there's a special spot {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} been meaning to show {PRONOUN/r_c/object}.",
         "decline_text": "Unfortunately, r_c is sent on an afternoon border patrol before either cat can head out of camp.",
         "chance_of_success": 80,
         "relationship_constraint": ["romantic_70", "mates"],
         "success_outcomes": [
             {
-                "text": "This is p_l's absolutely favorite spot in the territory in newleaf, {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/explain/explains}, brushing along r_c's side as the two cats pad whisker-close. It's just the perfect place to wind down, a beautiful, bubbling, calm stream, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} thought it'd be good for r_c to take some time just to breathe, just to relax, just to get to be {PRONOUN/r_c/self}. All the more special for being there together.",
+                "text": "This is p_l's absolute favorite spot in the territory in newleaf, {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/explain/explains}, brushing along r_c's side as the two cats pad whisker-close. It's just the perfect place to wind down, a beautiful, bubbling, calm stream, and {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} thought it'd be good for r_c to take some time just to breathe, just to relax, just to get to be {PRONOUN/r_c/self}. All the more special for being there together.",
                 "exp": 20,
                 "weight": 20,
                 "relationships": [
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
                 ]
             },
             {
-                "text": "Yes, the place is magical -  a beautiful, bubbling, calm stream, and the clouds clear and the light sparkles along it, making the forest shine with reflections. But as lovely as p_l's little secret is, it's improved beyond measure with the addition of r_c.",
+                "text": "Yes, the place is magical - a beautiful, bubbling, calm stream, and the clouds clear and the light sparkles along it, making the forest shine with reflections. But as lovely as p_l's little secret is, it's improved beyond measure with the addition of r_c.",
                 "exp": 20,
                 "weight": 5,
                 "relationships": [

resources/dicts/patrols/general/border.json

@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
                 ]
             },
             {
-                "text": "r_c would give their life to protect c_n, and as {PRONOUN/r_c/subject} {VERB/r_c/charge/charges} past the huge dog to lead it far, far from c_n, {PRONOUN/r_c/subject} {VERB/r_c/accept/accepts} it. Fear gives {PRONOUN/r_c/object} speed, but it only takes one successful hit. Miraculously {PRONOUN/r_c/subject} {VERB/r_c/fly/flies} out of the dog's jaws while it shakes {PRONOUN/r_c/object}, landing safely. r_c is injured, desperate, and terrified - but {PRONOUN/r_c/subject}{VERB/r_c/'re/'s} alive.",
+                "text": "r_c would give {PRONOUN/r_c/poss} life to protect c_n, and as {PRONOUN/r_c/subject} {VERB/r_c/charge/charges} past the huge dog to lead it far, far from c_n, {PRONOUN/r_c/subject} {VERB/r_c/accept/accepts} it. Fear gives {PRONOUN/r_c/object} speed, but it only takes one successful hit. Miraculously {PRONOUN/r_c/subject} {VERB/r_c/fly/flies} out of the dog's jaws while it shakes {PRONOUN/r_c/object}, landing safely. r_c is injured, desperate, and terrified - but {PRONOUN/r_c/subject}{VERB/r_c/'re/'s} alive.",
                 "exp": 0,
                 "weight": 10,
                 "injury": [
@@ -2400,7 +2400,7 @@
 
         },
 	{
-	"text": "p_l spins around just in time to see an impressively viscous kittypet lunging at {PRONOUN/p_l/object}. Once {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} recovered from {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} momentary shock, p_l easily overpowers the kittypet, who's snarling something about the dog being {PRONOUN/n_c:0/poss} 'friend'. The odd pair quickly run off, leaving behind a slightly dazed - and very confused - p_l.",
+	"text": "p_l spins around just in time to see an impressively vicious kittypet lunging at {PRONOUN/p_l/object}. Once {PRONOUN/p_l/subject}{VERB/p_l/'ve/'s} recovered from {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} momentary shock, p_l easily overpowers the kittypet, who's snarling something about the dog being {PRONOUN/n_c:0/poss} 'friend'. The odd pair quickly run off, leaving behind a slightly dazed - and very confused - p_l.",
             "exp": 2,
 	    "weight": 15,
 	     "new_cat": [
@@ -2447,7 +2447,7 @@
       ],
 	"antag_success_outcomes": [
         {
-	"text": "p_l ignores the voice, swiping {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} claws across the dog's face. Out of the corner of {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} eye, {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} sees a kittypet halt in {PRONOUN/n_c:0/poss} tracks, letting out a cry of dismay. It only takes another snarl from p_l for both kittypet and dog to flee.",
+	"text": "p_l ignores the voice, swiping {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} claws across the dog's face. Out of the corner of {PRONOUN/p_l/poss} eye, {PRONOUN/p_l/subject} {VERB/p_l/see/sees} a kittypet halt in {PRONOUN/n_c:0/poss} tracks, letting out a cry of dismay. It only takes another snarl from p_l for both kittypet and dog to flee.",
             "exp": 5,
 	    "new_cat": [
 		["kittypet", "meeting", "exists"]

resources/dicts/relationship_events/become_mates_poly.json

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 		],
 		"r_c_mates": [
 			"m_c and r_c see each other in a different light; after r_c talked with [r_c_mates], m_c and r_c have become mates.",
-			"m_c and r_c see each other in a different light; after r_c talked with {PRONOUN/m_c/poss} (r_c_mate/mates), they have become mates."
+			"m_c and r_c see each other in a different light; after r_c talked with {PRONOUN/r_c/poss} (r_c_mate/mates), they have become mates."
 		],
 		"both_mates": [
 			"m_c and r_c talked with their mates, and announced that they are now mates."
@@ -50,4 +50,4 @@
 			"m_c confessed {PRONOUN/m_c/poss} feelings to r_c, but was rejected."
 		]
 	}
-}
+}