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labs/shipped-quick-start/1.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ If you already have a Github account, you are ready to build and deploy your fir
 
 **Note:** You can use Shipped with any modern browser. For optimal results, Chrome is recommended.
 
-1. Open a browser, navigate to <a href="https://ciscoshipped.io/" target="_blank">Shipped</a>.  
+1. Log in to <a href="https://ciscoshipped.io/" target="_blank">Shipped UI</a>.  
     The Signup page open. 
 
     ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/sign-up-github.png)
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ If you already have a Github account, you are ready to build and deploy your fir
 
     ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/authorize.png)
 
-3. Click **Authorize application** (you only need to do this the first time you use Shipped).  
+3. Click **Authorize application** to allow Shipped to read your public data. You only need to do this the first time you use Shipped.  
     You are redirected to the Create Your Project form.
 
     ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/create-project.png)

labs/shipped-quick-start/2.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
         </tr>
         
         <tr>
-            <td>Cisco</td><td>Contains pre developed web apps using Cisco other project REST API, such as Tropo, CMX, APIC-EM.</td>
+            <td>Cisco</td><td>Contains pre developed web apps using Cisco other project Spark, such as Tropo API, CMX, APIC-EM.</td>
         </tr>
         
         <tr>
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
     </tbody>
 </table>
 
-4. Select **golang** development framework for this example.
+4. Select **golang** buildpack for this example.
 
     ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/compose-project.png)
 
@@ -50,6 +50,7 @@
 
 5. Select the Github Organization (it's your account by default), then click **Add Service**. 
     Shipped builds the project and sets up the GitHub repositories. The progress bar is displayed while the project is building. 
+
     ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/golang-hello-world.png)
 
 6. Click  **Save Project**.  

labs/shipped-quick-start/3.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 # Building your First Project
 
-You are now redirected to the dashboard tab, showing the events of your project. At the backend, Shipped creates a Github repository and adds a few project related files to it. 
+You are now redirected to the dashboard tab, showing the events of your project. At the backend, Shipped creates a GitHub repository and adds a few project-related files to it. 
 
 ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/build--project.png)
 
-1. Go to your Github account and search for **goHelloWorld** repo.
+1. Go to your GitHub account and search for **goHelloWorld** repo.
 
 
 2. View the project folder; Shipped adds a private repo to Drone to build your project.  
@@ -13,15 +13,15 @@ You are now redirected to the dashboard tab, showing the events of your project.
 	![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/hello-world-code.png)
 
 3. Click the **Build** tab and observe the progress of your first build.  
-    The build logs appear on the right and the status of project build on the left. The project is in the **In-Progress** state as indicated by the yellow circle.
+    The build logs appear on the right and the build status on the left. The project is in the **In-Progress** state as indicated by the yellow circle.
 
     ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/build-log.png)
 
-    When your build status changes to the **Passed** status, your first build is ready to deploy. 
+    When your build status changes to the **Passed** status (indicated by the green circle), your first build is ready to deploy. 
 
     ![](posts/files/shipped-quick-start/assets/test.png)
 
-    **Note**: If the build status is "Failed," see the details on the right and verify that your project code is buildable. 
+    **Note**: If the build status is "Failed," see details on the right and verify that your project code is buildable.