From 9ac1b8db96cba163f13749dd29803f8d65dbea18 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Filippo <110459737+filippoweb3@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 6 May 2024 09:31:06 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Edits Ledger (#5870) * rm space * minor grammarical edits --- docs/general/ledger.md | 40 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------- 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/general/ledger.md b/docs/general/ledger.md index e0f5bc09b533..d169d34ac622 100644 --- a/docs/general/ledger.md +++ b/docs/general/ledger.md @@ -9,11 +9,11 @@ slug: ../ledger import MessageBox from "../../components/MessageBox"; import "../../components/MessageBox.css"; - The {{ polkadot: Polkadot :polkadot }}{{ kusama: Kusama :kusama }} [Ledger](https://www.ledger.com/) -application is compatible with the Ledger Nano S, Nano X and Stax devices. Ledger devices are +application is compatible with the Ledger Nano S, Nano X, and Stax devices. Ledger devices are hardware wallets that keep your secret key secured on a physical device that does not expose it to your computer or the internet. The private keys will not be exposed even if you connect your Ledger device via USB to your computer. @@ -42,15 +42,15 @@ Ledger Nano S has limited functionality. The Ledger Nano S is no longer produced memory that is just right to accommodate the XL version of the Polkadot Ledger App, which gives the user more functionalities.

-If you do use a Nano S with the XL version you will not be able to: +If you do use a Nano S with the XL version, you will not be able to: - Install any other Ledger application on your device - Add Polkadot accounts to the Ledger Live App. But you will be able to add them to [wallets and extensions](./wallets-and-extensions.md) that -support Ledger devices.

+support Ledger devices. -More information on Ledger devices comparisons +More information on Ledger device comparisons [here](https://shop.ledger.com/pages/hardware-wallets-comparison). ## Requirements @@ -70,8 +70,8 @@ Here is a list of what you will need before using ## Polkadot Ledger App Ledger devices can be equipped with applications that are blockchain-specific. Third parties usually -develop such applications, enabling the user to transact securely on the blockchain network. -Polkadot Ledger apps are developed by [Zondax](https://zondax.ch/) and are available +develop such applications, enabling users to transact securely on the blockchain network. Polkadot +Ledger apps are developed by [Zondax](https://zondax.ch/) and are available [here](https://github.com/Zondax/ledger-polkadot). The Polkadot Ledger applications allow you to manage {{ polkadot: Polkadot's :polkadot }}{{ kusama: Kusama's :kusama }} native token, {{ polkadot: DOT :polkadot }}{{ kusama: KSM :kusama }}, and more depending on the version of the @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ There are currently three versions of the Polkadot Ledger app, described below. | XL | Ongoing | | Nano SP/X - Stax | Ongoing | -These Ledger apps need to be updated every time there is a runtime upgrade. +These Ledger apps must be updated every time there is a runtime upgrade. ## Polkadot Ledger Generic App @@ -106,12 +106,12 @@ Check this [website](https://substrate.beryx.io/new_polkadot_ledger_app) for upd ::: -The Polkadot Ledger Generic App will allow to use your Ledger device on the Relay Chain and -parachains as well, without being affected by runtime upgrades. The goal is to provide a single -application for the entire Polkadot ecosystem without compromising security. This new app will also -count with Clear Signing which allows you to see what you sign on a trusted display. This way, -unintentionally signing rogue transactions can be avoided. [See this page](./transaction-attacks.md) -to understand the importance of verifying transactions before signing them. +The Polkadot Ledger Generic App will allow you to use your Ledger device on the Relay Chain and +parachains without being affected by runtime upgrades. The goal is to provide a single application +for the entire Polkadot ecosystem without compromising security. This new app will also count with +Clear Signing, allowing you to see what you sign on a trusted display. This way, unintentionally +signing rogue transactions can be avoided. [See this page](./transaction-attacks.md) to understand +the importance of verifying transactions before signing them. The Polkadot Ledger Generic app brings the following benefits: @@ -120,15 +120,15 @@ The Polkadot Ledger Generic app brings the following benefits: - Network Adoption: Facilitating a smoother and more user-friendly adoption of the Polkadot ecosystem. - Innovation without compromising security: The new Polkadot app comes with the highest security - standards so that users can keep their assets in a safe way. -- Development Efficiency: The app helps developing teams by saving costs for having and maintaining - their own app. + standards so that users can keep their assets safe. +- Development Efficiency: The app helps developing teams save costs by having and maintaining their + app. The Polkadot Ledger Generic app will be supported by Ledger Live, [Nova Wallet](https://novawallet.io/), [Talisman](https://www.talisman.xyz/), and [Subwallet](https://www.subwallet.app/). -For more information about the Polkadot Generic App see the +For more information about the Polkadot Generic App, see the [Ledger FAQ](https://support.ledger.com/hc/en-us/articles/17550211746845-New-Polkadot-app-FAQ?docs=true%20:dot), and [Zondax beryx page](https://substrate.beryx.io/new_polkadot_ledger_app). @@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ developer release from the shell using the latest version published on See [**this video tutorial**](https://youtu.be/4SyVQrlXZ_Q) to learn how to install the developer release of your ledger app. -Currently, the developer release can be installed only on the Nano S and S plus devices and can't be +Currently, the developer release can be installed only on the Nano S and S Plus devices and can't be installed on the Nano X. ::: @@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ below: ![Dev Ledger Help Menu](../assets/ledger-help-menu.png) -- Attach your Ledger Nano (in this case Nano S Plus) to your computer, enter the PIN code, and run +- Attach your Ledger Nano (in this case, Nano S Plus) to your computer, enter the PIN code, and run the command `./installer_nanos_plus.sh load`. Scroll with the right button until you see "Allow unsafe manager", left and right press to confirm. You will be asked to confirm the action of uninstalling the app and subsequently installing the newer version. After confirming both actions,