feat: Review homepage text, closes #269

open-contracting · Nov 1, 2024 · 61340f3 · 61340f3
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diff --git a/data_registry/locale/en/LC_MESSAGES/django.po b/data_registry/locale/en/LC_MESSAGES/django.po
@@ -512,12 +512,12 @@ msgstr "Data by country"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:43
 msgid ""
-"We've designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
+"We designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
 "procurement datasets that are available in the <a href=\"https://standard."
 "open-contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/\" target=\"_blank\">OCDS format</"
 "a>."
 msgstr ""
-"We've designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
+"We designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
 "procurement datasets that are available in the <a href=\"https://standard."
 "open-contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/\" target=\"_blank\">OCDS format</"
 "a>."
@@ -542,36 +542,24 @@ msgstr "Learn about the source"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:67
 msgid ""
-"Information about each data source is provided to help you to understand "
-"what fields are available or if there are any documents."
+"We describe each dataset's source and coverage, at both an administrative level (public bodies, systems and procedures covered) and technical level (fields covered and linked documents)."
 msgstr ""
-"Information about each data source is provided to help you to understand "
-"what fields are available or if there are any documents."
+"We describe each dataset's source and coverage, at both an administrative level (public bodies, systems and procedures covered) and technical level (fields covered and linked documents)."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:72
 msgid ""
-"Any known data quality issues and advice on how to access data is provided "
-"here too."
+"We include information on any known data quality issues."
 msgstr ""
-"We also included any known data quality issues and advice on how to access "
-"the data."
+"We include information on any known data quality issues."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:91
-msgid "Get Directed"
-msgstr "Get direct access to the source data"
+msgid "Get instant access to data"
+msgstr "Get instant access to data"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:94
 msgid ""
-"The registry links you directly to the data source for you to access data."
-msgstr "The OCDS data is available to download either in JSON or Excel/CSV."
-
-#: data_registry/templates/index.html:99
-msgid ""
-"If data is available from the OCP Kingfisher database you can download it "
-"directly in JSON or Excel using the Flatten Tool Interface."
-msgstr ""
-"You can also customize the data fields you need for a more manageable "
-"dataset."
+"Whole OCDS datasets are available to download in bulk, in JSON, Excel and CSV formats."
+msgstr "Whole OCDS datasets are available to download in bulk, in JSON, Excel and CSV formats."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/search.html:6
 msgid "Search for and download OCDS data"

diff --git a/data_registry/locale/en_US/LC_MESSAGES/django.po b/data_registry/locale/en_US/LC_MESSAGES/django.po
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: PACKAGE VERSION\n"
 "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: \n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2024-11-01 22:18+0000\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2024-11-01 23:32+0000\n"
 "PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
 "Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL@ADDRESS>\n"
 "Language-Team: LANGUAGE <[email protected]>\n"
@@ -469,10 +469,9 @@ msgstr ""
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:43
 msgid ""
-"We've designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
-"procurement datasets that are available in the <a href=\"https://standard."
-"open-contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/\" target=\"_blank\">OCDS format</"
-"a>."
+"We designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public procurement "
+"datasets that are available in the <a href=\"https://standard.open-"
+"contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/\" target=\"_blank\">OCDS format</a>."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:48
@@ -490,29 +489,23 @@ msgstr ""
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:67
 msgid ""
-"Information about each data source is provided to help you to understand "
-"what fields are available or if there are any documents."
+"We describe each dataset's source and coverage, at both an administrative "
+"level (public bodies, systems and procedures covered) and technical level "
+"(fields covered and linked documents)."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:72
-msgid ""
-"Any known data quality issues and advice on how to access data is provided "
-"here too."
+msgid "We include information on any known data quality issues."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:91
-msgid "Get Directed"
+msgid "Get instant access to data"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:94
 msgid ""
-"The registry links you directly to the data source for you to access data."
-msgstr ""
-
-#: data_registry/templates/index.html:99
-msgid ""
-"If data is available from the OCP Kingfisher database you can download it "
-"directly in JSON or Excel using the Flatten Tool Interface."
+"Whole OCDS datasets are available to download in bulk, in JSON, Excel and "
+"CSV formats."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: data_registry/templates/search.html:6

diff --git a/data_registry/locale/es/LC_MESSAGES/django.po b/data_registry/locale/es/LC_MESSAGES/django.po
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ msgstr "Datos por país"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:43
 msgid ""
-"We've designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
+"We designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
 "procurement datasets that are available in the <a href=\"https://standard."
 "open-contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/\" target=\"_blank\">OCDS format</"
 "a>."
@@ -548,37 +548,25 @@ msgstr "Aprenda más sobre la fuente"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:67
 msgid ""
-"Information about each data source is provided to help you to understand "
-"what fields are available or if there are any documents."
+"We describe each dataset's source and coverage, at both an administrative level (public bodies, systems and procedures covered) and technical level (fields covered and linked documents)."
 msgstr ""
-"La información de cada fuente de datos es proveída para ayudarte a entender "
-"qué campos están disponibles o si se publican documentos."
+"Describimos la fuente y la cobertura de cada conjunto de datos, tanto a nivel administrativo (organismos públicos, sistemas y procedimientos cubiertos) como a nivel técnico (campos cubiertos y documentos vinculados)."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:72
 msgid ""
-"Any known data quality issues and advice on how to access data is provided "
-"here too."
+"We include information on any known data quality issues."
 msgstr ""
-"También incluimos cualquier problema conocido de calidad de los datos y "
-"consejos sobre cómo acceder a los datos."
+"Incluimos información sobre cualquier problema conocido de calidad de los datos."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:91
-msgid "Get Directed"
-msgstr "Obtenga acceso directo a la fuente de datos"
+msgid "Get instant access to data"
+msgstr "Obtenga acceso instantáneo a los datos"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:94
 msgid ""
-"The registry links you directly to the data source for you to access data."
+"Whole OCDS datasets are available to download in bulk, in JSON, Excel and CSV formats."
 msgstr ""
-"Los datos OCDS están disponibles para ser descargados como JSON o Excel/CSV."
-
-#: data_registry/templates/index.html:99
-msgid ""
-"If data is available from the OCP Kingfisher database you can download it "
-"directly in JSON or Excel using the Flatten Tool Interface."
-msgstr ""
-"También puedes personalizar los campos de datos que necesitas para obtener "
-"un conjunto de datos más manejable."
+"Los conjuntos de datos completos de OCDS están disponibles para descargar en forma masiva, en formatos JSON, Excel y CSV."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/search.html:6
 msgid "Search for and download OCDS data"

diff --git a/data_registry/locale/ru/LC_MESSAGES/django.po b/data_registry/locale/ru/LC_MESSAGES/django.po
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ msgstr "Данные по странам"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:43
 msgid ""
-"We've designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
+"We designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public "
 "procurement datasets that are available in the <a href=\"https://standard."
 "open-contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/\" target=\"_blank\">OCDS format</"
 "a>."
@@ -548,37 +548,26 @@ msgstr "Узнать об источнике данных"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:67
 msgid ""
-"Information about each data source is provided to help you to understand "
-"what fields are available or if there are any documents."
+"We describe each dataset's source and coverage, at both an administrative level (public bodies, systems and procedures covered) and technical level (fields covered and linked documents)."
 msgstr ""
 "Предоставляется информация о каждом источнике данных, чтобы помочь вам "
 "понять, какие поля доступны или есть ли какие-либо документы."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:72
 msgid ""
-"Any known data quality issues and advice on how to access data is provided "
-"here too."
+"We include information on any known data quality issues."
 msgstr ""
-"Здесь также представлены все известные проблемы с качеством данных и советы "
-"о том, как получить доступ к данным."
+"Здесь также представлены все известные проблемы с качеством данных ."
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:91
-msgid "Get Directed"
+msgid "Get instant access to data"
 msgstr "Получить инструкции"
 
 #: data_registry/templates/index.html:94
 msgid ""
-"The registry links you directly to the data source for you to access data."
+"Whole OCDS datasets are available to download in bulk, in JSON, Excel and CSV formats."
 msgstr "Реестр связывает вас напрямую с источником данных для доступа к ним."
 
-#: data_registry/templates/index.html:99
-msgid ""
-"If data is available from the OCP Kingfisher database you can download it "
-"directly in JSON or Excel using the Flatten Tool Interface."
-msgstr ""
-"Вы также можете настроить поля данных, которые вам нужны, для более "
-"управляемого набора данных."
-
 #: data_registry/templates/search.html:6
 msgid "Search for and download OCDS data"
 msgstr "Поиск и загрузка данных OCDS"

diff --git a/data_registry/templates/index.html b/data_registry/templates/index.html
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ <h2 class="card-title mb-4 h5">
                 </h2>
                 <p class="card-text">
                     {% blocktranslate trimmed %}
-                        We've designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public procurement datasets that are available in the <a href="https://standard.open-contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/" target="_blank">OCDS format</a>.
+                        We designed the Data Registry to help you find and access public procurement datasets that are available in the <a href="https://standard.open-contracting.org/latest/en/primer/what/" target="_blank">OCDS format</a>.
                     {% endblocktranslate %}
                 </p>
                 <p class="card-text">
@@ -65,12 +65,12 @@ <h2 class="card-title mb-4 h5">
                 </h2>
                 <p class="card-text">
                     {% blocktranslate trimmed %}
-                        Information about each data source is provided to help you to understand what fields are available or if there are any documents.
+                        We describe each dataset's source and coverage, at both an administrative level (public bodies, systems and procedures covered) and technical level (fields covered and linked documents).
                     {% endblocktranslate %}
                 </p>
                 <p class="card-text">
                     {% blocktranslate trimmed %}
-                        Any known data quality issues and advice on how to access data is provided here too.
+                        We include information on any known data quality issues.
                     {% endblocktranslate %}
                 </p>
             </div>
@@ -88,16 +88,11 @@ <h2 class="card-title mb-4 h5">
                         <line x1="12" y1="13" x2="12" y2="9"/>
                         <line x1="12" y1="5" x2="12" y2="3"/>
                     </svg>
-                    {% translate "Get Directed" %}
+                    {% translate "Get instant access to data" %}
                 </h2>
                 <p class="card-text">
                     {% blocktranslate trimmed %}
-                        The registry links you directly to the data source for you to access data.
-                    {% endblocktranslate %}
-                </p>
-                <p class="card-text">
-                    {% blocktranslate trimmed %}
-                        If data is available from the OCP Kingfisher database you can download it directly in JSON or Excel using the Flatten Tool Interface.
+                        Whole OCDS datasets are available to download in bulk, in JSON, Excel and CSV formats.
                     {% endblocktranslate %}
                 </p>
             </div>