From beb02fd12e30718e553ab7ec4335707953bad75c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Viktor Zaunders <viktor@darksoil.studio>
Date: Thu, 19 Dec 2024 14:52:49 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] ingress

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 hc-intro/index.html | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 index.html          |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/hc-intro/index.html b/hc-intro/index.html
index 4d3f316..9d209bf 100644
--- a/hc-intro/index.html
+++ b/hc-intro/index.html
@@ -66,11 +66,10 @@
           <h2 id="courses" link-text="courses">Developer training: Intro to Holochain</h2>
           <h3>Learn how to design, develop, and deploy Holochain apps in two weeks with:</h3>
           <p> 
-            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Interactive live sessions:</b> highly engaging learning format</li>
-            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Taught by Guillem Cordoba:</b>  world esteemed teacher and developer</li>
-            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Top-class interactive material:</b> continuously reinforced learning</li>
-            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Small cohort size:</b> increased peer learning, select group of experienced developers</li>
-            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Online training:</b> join us from anywhere in the world</li>
+            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Interactive live sessions</b></li>
+            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Taught by leading Holochain developer, Guillem Cordoba</b></li>
+            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Small group size</b></li>
+            <li style="font-size:larger;"><b>Online training, join us from anywhere</b></li>
           </p>
 
           <p><a href="https://forms.gle/QPZ8yR4sYZvJtWH57" class="button">Apply Now!</a></p>
@@ -80,8 +79,9 @@ <h2>Learn to build web3 apps</h2>
           <rocket-columns>
             <rocket-card>
               <p>Holochain is an open-source protocol for developing peer-to-peer applications.</p> 
-              <p>The protocol allows for highly modular development of local-first functionality that can be combined into fully featured cryptographically secure applications.</p>
-              <p>Holochain is a key part of a new robust, resilient and sovereign technological infrastructure. You can learn more here.</p>
+              <p>The protocol allows for modular development of local-first functionality and fully featured cryptographically secure applications.</p>
+              <p>Holochain can be used to build robust, resilient and sovereign technological infrastructure.</p>
+              <p><a href="https://developer.holochain.org/">Learn more about it here.</a></p>
             </rocket-card>
           </rocket-columns>
 
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ <h2>Outcomes</h2>
           <rocket-columns>
             <rocket-card>
               <p>At the end of the program, you can:
-            <li style="font-size: 20px; text-align: left;">Make and distribute simple Holochain apps</li>
+            <li style="font-size: 20px; text-align: left;">Make simple Holochain apps</li>
             <li style="font-size: 20px; text-align: left;">Work as a Holochain developer</li>
             <li style="font-size: 20px; text-align: left;">Understand the basics of Holochain architecture</li>
           </p>
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ <h2>Meet your instructor</h2>
             <rocket-columns>
               <rocket-card>
                 <h4 slot="title">Guillem Cordoba</h4>
-                <img src="../guillem_circular.png" class="photo" style="max-width: 300px;" />
+                <img src="../guillem_circular.png" class="photo" style="max-width: 200px;" />
                 <p>Guillem has been building Holochain applications for several years, he has been a key contributor to both the Holochain protocol and the ecosystem as a whole. </p>
                 <p>Guillem has trained others on Holochain development for nearly as long. He held the community-led development programs (dev camps) and online as well as in-person Holochain intensive development courses. He is one of the world's most experienced and knowledgeable Holochain developers and an outstanding teacher. </p>
                 </rocket-card>
@@ -214,14 +214,14 @@ <h2>Support staff</h2>
             <rocket-columns>
               <rocket-card>
                 <h4 slot="title">Viktor Zaunders</h4>
-                <img src="../viktor_circular.png" class="photo" style="max-width: 300px;" />
+                <img src="../viktor_circular.png" class="photo" style="max-width: 200px;" />
                 <p>Viktor has been organizing community events and learning environments for several years. He is a software architect that is also passionate about learning and creating spaces where people feel comfortable.</p> 
                 <p>He will be doing the support, administration and communications around the course to make sure that students have a great experience.</p>
               </rocket-card>
 
               <rocket-card>
                 <h4 slot="title">Eric Bear</h4>
-                <img src="../bear_circular.png" class="photo" style="max-width: 300px;" />
+                <img src="../bear_circular.png" class="photo" style="max-width: 200px;" />
                 <p>Eric Bear is an event and community organizer with more than a decade of experience in creating learning environments. He loves creating spaces for connection and development and takes great care in helping students get set up to learn.</p> 
                 <p>Eric will be responsible for opening the course as well as for the closing and evaluation. </p>
               </rocket-card>
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 7ce2095..8ef3582 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ <h4 slot="title">Eric Bear</h4>
                 <a href="http://agilelearningcenters.org/"
                   >Agile Learning Centers</a
                 >
-                and is the director of ecosystem growth at Holochain. <br /><br />
+                and was the director of ecosystem growth at Holochain. <br /><br />
                 Bear wants to be a good ant by fostering play, relationship and
                 agency in the world.
               </p>