From 9c078c5dc93de8ff2599affb295174a94253361f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andy Li <1450947+andy1li@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 2 Dec 2024 16:26:33 +0800
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] refactor: Update multiple PING commands stage in course
 definition

---
 course-definition.yml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/course-definition.yml b/course-definition.yml
index 8fb7219..3517ca3 100644
--- a/course-definition.yml
+++ b/course-definition.yml
@@ -227,13 +227,13 @@ stages:
       $ ./your_program.sh
       ```
 
-      It'll then send two PING commands using the same connection:
+      It'll then send multiple (N) PING commands using the same connection. For example, it might send:
 
       ```bash
       $ echo -e "PING\nPING" | redis-cli
       ```
 
-      The tester will expect to receive two `+PONG\r\n` responses.
+      The tester will expect to receive N (two in this case) `+PONG\r\n` responses.
 
       {{#lang_is_javascript}}
       In most languages, you'd need to run a loop that reads input from a connection and sends a
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ stages:
 
       - Just like the previous stage, you can hardcode `+PONG\r\n` as the response for this stage. We'll get to parsing
        client input in later stages.
-      - The two PING commands will be sent using the same connection. We'll get to handling multiple connections in later stages.
+      - The multiple PING commands will be sent using the same connection. We'll get to handling multiple connections in later stages.
     marketing_md: |-
       In this stage, you'll respond to multiple
       [PING](https://redis.io/commands/ping) commands sent by the same client.

From 56aea66a3d425ff5a7fe8b97c6016bd2077dd840 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andy Li <1450947+andy1li@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 4 Dec 2024 16:36:15 +0800
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Improved based on feedback

---
 course-definition.yml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/course-definition.yml b/course-definition.yml
index 3517ca3..c167de1 100644
--- a/course-definition.yml
+++ b/course-definition.yml
@@ -227,13 +227,13 @@ stages:
       $ ./your_program.sh
       ```
 
-      It'll then send multiple (N) PING commands using the same connection. For example, it might send:
+      It'll then send multiple PING commands using the same connection. For example, it might send:
 
       ```bash
       $ echo -e "PING\nPING" | redis-cli
       ```
 
-      The tester will expect to receive N (two in this case) `+PONG\r\n` responses.
+      The tester will expect to receive multiple `+PONG\r\n` responses (one for each command sent).
 
       {{#lang_is_javascript}}
       In most languages, you'd need to run a loop that reads input from a connection and sends a
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ stages:
 
       - Just like the previous stage, you can hardcode `+PONG\r\n` as the response for this stage. We'll get to parsing
        client input in later stages.
-      - The multiple PING commands will be sent using the same connection. We'll get to handling multiple connections in later stages.
+      - The PING commands will be sent using the same connection. We'll get to handling multiple connections in later stages.
     marketing_md: |-
       In this stage, you'll respond to multiple
       [PING](https://redis.io/commands/ping) commands sent by the same client.