updated TS overview page

docs/products/kafka/howto/tiered-storage-overview-page.rst

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Tiered storage overview in Aiven Console
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-Aiven for Apache Kafka® offers a comprehensive overview of tiered storage, allowing you to understand its usage and make informed decisions. This overview provides insights into various aspects of tiered storage, including billing, settings, and storage details.
+Aiven for Apache Kafka® offers a comprehensive overview of tiered storage, allowing you to understand its usage and make informed decisions. This overview provides insights into various aspects of tiered storage, including hourly billing, settings, and storage details.
 
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@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@ Aiven for Apache Kafka® offers a comprehensive overview of tiered storage, allo
 Access tiered storage overview
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-1. In the `Aiven console <https://console.aiven.io/>`_, choose your project and select your Aiven for Apache Kafka service.
+1. Log in to the `Aiven console <https://console.aiven.io/>`_, choose your project and select your Aiven for Apache Kafka service.
 2. From the left sidebar, select **Tiered Storage**.
 
-   - If you haven't enabled tiered storage for your service, you'll have the option to enable it.
+   - If tiered storage is not yet enabled for your service, you will see the option to enabled it.
    - If tiered storage is enabled but not configured for any topics, you have the option to set it up for topics directly. For more details, see :doc:`Enable and configure tiered storage for topics </docs/products/kafka/howto/configure-topic-tiered-storage>`. 
 
 3. Once configured, you can view an overview of tiered storage and its associated details.
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Key insights of tiered storage
 
 Get a quick snapshot of the essential metrics and details related to tiered storage:
 
-- **Current billing expenses in USD**: Stay informed about your current tiered storage expenses.
+- **Current billing expenses in USD**: Displays your tiered storage costs, calculated at hourly rates.
 - **Forecasted month cost in USD**: Estimate your upcoming monthly costs based on current usage.
 - **Remote tier usage in bytes**: View the volume of data that has been tiered.
 - **Storage overview**: View how topics use :ref:`remote storage <remote-storage-overview>`.
@@ -44,14 +44,14 @@ This section provides an overview of the current local cache details and retenti
 Modify retention policies 
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-1. In the **Tiered storage settings** section, select the ellipsis (three dots) and select **Update tiered storage settings**.
+1. In the **Tiered storage settings** section, click **Actions(...)** and click **Update tiered storage settings**.
 2. Within **Update tiered storage settings** page, adjust the values for:
 
    - Local Cache
    - Default Local Retention Time (ms)
    - Default Local Retention Bytes
 
-3. Confirm your adjustments by selecting **Save changes**.
+3. Click **Save changes**. 
 
 .. _remote-storage-overview:
 
@@ -60,6 +60,6 @@ Remote storage overview
 
 Explore the specifics of your storage usage and configurations:
 
-- **Remote storage usage by topics**: Take a deep dive into how much tiered storage is used per topic.
+- **Remote storage usage by topics**: Analyze how much tiered storage each topic uses.
 - **Filter by topic**: Narrow down your view to specific topics for focused insights.