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@@ -32,6 +32,17 @@ <h1>Culture Bobbin</h1>
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         <div>
           <h2>About</h2>
+          <section>
+            <h3>What is a bobbin?</h3>
+            <p>
+              My parents were swamped with grad school, and I stayed with my grandparents often when I was little.
+              My grandma operated a foot pedal sewing machine and made clothing, curtains, and even seat
+              cushions herself aside from her day job overseeing the county's import export company.
+              She agreed to teach me how to sew when I found her stash of buttons one day.
+              Bobbins hold not just threads, but know-how that reduced the amount of labor in producing cloth.
+              Likewise, culture is held, and we weave our stories into new ones.
+            </p>
+          </section>
           <section>
             <h3>Bio</h3>
             <p>
@@ -41,33 +52,33 @@ <h3>Bio</h3>
             <p>
               My name is
                 <span class="bold">Xi</span>.
-              I currently work as an engineer in Web3 on data sovereignty projects.
-              Heritage belongs to the world, but freedom and choice during our lifetimes empower us to visit the Fixed Stars (Faith, Hope, and Love).
+              I currently work as an engineer on data sovereignty projects in the Web3 domain.
+              Heritage belongs to the world, but freedom and trust during our lifetimes empower us to visit Dante's Fixed Stars (Faith, Hope, and Love).
             </p>
             <p>
-              Once upon a time, I studied cultural anthropology. I enjoy culture shock that much.
-              I treasure my times spent on the small town ranch in rural Texas as much as Istanbul and Berlin.
-              My best keepsakes are memories of new dishes and folk dances.
+              Once upon a time, I studied cultural anthropology. I enjoy culture shock that much!
+              I treasure my time spent on the small town ranch in rural Texas as much as Istanbul and Berlin.
+              New recipes and dance steps are my traveling keepsakes.
             </p>
           </section>
           <section>
             <h3>Values</h3>
             <p>
               I prioritize intrinsic motivation over extrinsic ones, and value health and growth.
-              Health has four components, physical, mental, emotional, and spiritual.
+              Wellness has four components, physical, mental, emotional, and spiritual.
               Join me if we are ever in the same city for a run! #functionalfitness
             </p>
             <p>
-              I pray that I will one day be blessed with ambitious daughters and kind sons.
+              I pray that I will one day be blessed with ambitious daughters and gracious sons.
               If I could only pick three stats, I'd ask them to work on kindness, curiousity, and determination.
             </p>
           </section>
           <section>
             <h3>Apache Blessing</h3>
             <p>
-            May the sun bring you new energy by day, may the moon softly restore you by night,
-            may the rain wash away your worries, may the breeze blow new strength into your being,
-            and may you walk gently through the world and know its beauty all the days of your life.
+              May the sun bring you new energy by day, may the moon softly restore you by night,
+              may the rain wash away your worries, may the breeze blow new strength into your being,
+              and may you walk gently through the world and know its beauty all the days of your life.
             </p>
           </section>
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