From d7f1612cbc338f24a89ec1ba67248cf0eded8618 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: atlinx <atlinuxtm@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Nov 2024 13:01:50 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos, improve wording on SS page

---
 .../scarlet-showcase-page.component.html      | 41 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/app/pages/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase-page.component.html b/src/app/pages/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase-page.component.html
index 128a50f..99c5110 100644
--- a/src/app/pages/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase-page.component.html
+++ b/src/app/pages/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase/scarlet-showcase-page.component.html
@@ -73,19 +73,14 @@
     <div style="display: flex; gap: 4em; flex-direction: column;">
       <div>
         <h1>What is Scarlet Showcase?</h1>
-        <p>Scarlet Showcase is a showcase of the creative-work from creative-oriented clubs at Rutgers! Creation of
-          Games
-          Society (COGS), Animation Club (AC), Digital Art Club (DAC), Voice Acting Network and Collective of
-          Entertainers
-          (VANCE), and Rutgers
-          University Club for Video Game Music (RUCVGM), are coming together to showcase member projects and run fun
-          activities!.<br><br> Come try
-          out
-          video
-          games from COGS, listen to music made by RUCVGM, voice act in a mini recording booth ran by VANCE, see art
-          made
-          by Digital Art Club members, and view the rough-cut of Animation Club's upcoming animated short-film! See the
-          Itinerary below for a full list of activities.</p>
+        <p>Scarlet Showcase is a showcase of the student work from creative clubs at Rutgers! Creation of Games Society
+          (COGS), Animation Club (AC), Digital Art Club (DAC), Voice Acting Network and Collective of Entertainers
+          (VANCE), and Rutgers University Club for Video Game Music (RUCVGM) are coming together to showcase member
+          projects and run fun activities!.
+          <br><br> Come try out video games from COGS, listen to music made by RUCVGM, voice act in a mini recording
+          booth run by VANCE, see art made by Digital Art Club members, and view the rough cut of Animation Club's
+          upcoming animated short film! See the Itinerary below for a full list of activities.
+        </p>
       </div>
       <app-column-layout style="gap: 2em;">
         <div style="width: 100%">
@@ -143,7 +138,7 @@ <h1>DAC</h1>
         ">5:00 PM</h2>
             <div style="flex-grow: 1;">
               <h2>Showcase + Activities</h2>
-              <p>In the first part of the event, clubs will showcase their projects and host various activities. If you
+              <p>Explore engaging activities and exhibits hosted by some of Rutgers' digital creative clubs. If you
                 participate in 5+ activities, you're eligible for a <b>secret raffle prize</b>! Here's
                 a list of all the activities and showcases:</p>
               <div>
@@ -165,7 +160,7 @@ <h2 style="font-weight: 900; font-size: 2em;">
                         Top 3 fastest times will win free stickers and candy.
                       </li>
                       <li>
-                        1st place will <b>win an official 7 inch Among Us plushie</b>
+                        1st place will <b>win an official 7-inch Among Us plushie</b>
                       </li>
                     </ul>
                   </li>
@@ -173,7 +168,7 @@ <h2 style="font-weight: 900; font-size: 2em;">
                     Merch
                     <ul>
                       <li>
-                        Buy video game themed merchnadise to help support COGS!
+                        Buy video game-themed merchnadise to help support COGS!
                       </li>
                     </ul>
                   </li>
@@ -230,7 +225,7 @@ <h2 style="font-weight: 900; font-size: 2em;">
                     Dollar Doodles
                     <ul>
                       <li>
-                        Comission Animation Club members to draw a sketch of anything for one dollar!
+                        Commission Animation Club members to draw a sketch of anything for one dollar!
                       </li>
                     </ul>
                   </li>
@@ -253,7 +248,7 @@ <h2 style="font-weight: 900; font-size: 2em;">
                   <li>
                     Merch
                     <ul>
-                      Buy merchnadise from Digital Art Club artists!
+                      Buy merchandise from Digital Art Club artists!
                     </ul>
                   </li>
                 </ul>
@@ -270,16 +265,18 @@ <h2 style="font-weight: 900; font-size: 2em;">
         ">7:00 PM</h2>
             <div>
               <h2>Awards Ceremony</h2>
-              <p>A formal awards ceremony will be held where clubs will give out awards to their members in various
-                categories. Two awards from each club will be presented as a physical trophy. The award trophies are
-                generously
+              <p>Join us for an opportunity to celebrate the achievements of each club and their outstanding members.
+                Presidents from each club will take to the stage to recognize the dedication and creativity of their
+                peers, as well as the exceptional work done by their club as a whole. Various awards and trophies will
+                be presented to club members, with the trophies generously
                 provided
                 by <a href="https://rutgers.campuslabs.com/engage/organization/rumakersclub"
                   target="_blank">RUMakers</a>.
                 Attendees
                 can vote on a few
                 community awards, so be sure to vote on your
-                favorite club projects!</p>
+                favorite projects. You won't want to miss this inspirational conclusion to the Scarlet Showcase!
+              </p>
             </div>
           </app-column-layout>
         </div>