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<p>This is a series of my lecture notes about English writing. The
English writing lessons are on <a
target="_blank" rel="noopener" href="https://www.bilibili.com/video/av52634595">Bilibili</a>. This blog
is the first lecture note about <strong>how to improve your English
writing</strong>.</p>
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<p>Before your writing, you need know what you write for or what you
want to achieve. Then you need plan your writing. What idea you should
include and what idea you need leave out? You need know your goal and
what your reader need. Next you need organize your ideas into clear
paragraphs. Usually one main idea is in per paragraph. Cutting empty
words and sentences, as well as using short simple sentence where
possible (about 10 words in a sentence) are a good habit. Finally, it's
important to put your subject at the start of the sentence.</p>
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<p>Below is my notes:</p>
<h2 id="part-one">Part one</h2>
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<p>Understand your audience</p>
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<ul>
<li>Who are you writing for?</li>
<li>What are you trying to achieve?</li>
<li>What does your reader want?</li>
</ul>
<h2 id="part-two">Part two</h2>
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<p>Planning your writing</p>
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<ul>
<li>What ides are you going to include?</li>
<li>What ideas are you going to leave out?</li>
<li>How are you going to organize your idea?</li>
</ul>
<h2 id="part-three">Part three</h2>
<blockquote>
<p>Deciding what to including</p>
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<ul>
<li>Think about your goal</li>
<li>Think about your reader's needs</li>
</ul>
<h2 id="part-four">Part four</h2>
<blockquote>
<p>Using paragraphs</p>
</blockquote>
<ul>
<li>One main idea per paragraph</li>
<li>Don't try to do too much in one paragraph</li>
<li>There's no minimum length for a paragraph!</li>
</ul>
<blockquote>
<p>Write as little as possible</p>
</blockquote>
<ul>
<li><del>very tired</del>, exhausted</li>
<li><del>as a result</del>, consequently</li>
<li>This will <del>get better</del> improve in the future</li>
</ul>
<h2 id="part-five">Part five</h2>
<blockquote>
<p>Use short, simple sentences where possible</p>
</blockquote>
<ul>
<li>10 words is good target</li>
<li>20+ words could be dangerous</li>
<li>Don't use the passive voice unless you need to ???</li>
<li>Put your subject at the start of the sentence</li>
<li>Don't use relative clauses unless you really need to</li>
<li>Consider breaking longer sentences into shorter ones</li>
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