From 42aba8848de5fe9bb5dcdc3fd7276f5df4119ef5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jaehyun Joo Date: Mon, 22 Apr 2024 16:49:29 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Responded to CRAN Reviwer's comments --- CRAN-SUBMISSION | 4 ++-- DESCRIPTION | 20 ++++++++++---------- cran-comments.md | 15 +++++++++++---- man/pargasite-package.Rd | 2 +- vignettes/PARGASITE.Rmd | 6 +++--- 5 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/CRAN-SUBMISSION b/CRAN-SUBMISSION index 4dee02d..771d91f 100644 --- a/CRAN-SUBMISSION +++ b/CRAN-SUBMISSION @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ Version: 2.1.0 -Date: 2024-04-16 21:36:07 UTC -SHA: 491201d962c8c90436a35c36659c292e396941b8 +Date: 2024-04-19 16:30:25 UTC +SHA: 46a87420fe5917697dbe94bd9b05e2bc21acd26a diff --git a/DESCRIPTION b/DESCRIPTION index 69283ee..763111c 100644 --- a/DESCRIPTION +++ b/DESCRIPTION @@ -19,15 +19,15 @@ Authors@R: c( family = "Himes", role = c("aut")) ) -Description: This package offers tools to estimate and visualize levels of major - pollutants (CO, NO2, SO2, Ozone, PM2.5 and PM10) across the - conterminous United States for user-defined time ranges. It - provides functions to retrieve pollutant data from the - Environmental Protection Agency’s (EPA) Air Quality System (AQS) - API service for interactive visualization through a 'Shiny' - application, allowing users to explore pollutant levels for a given - location over time relative to the National Ambient Air Quality - Standards (NAAQS). +Description: Offers tools to estimate and visualize levels of major pollutants + (CO, NO2, SO2, Ozone, PM2.5 and PM10) across the conterminous + United States for user-defined time ranges. Provides functions to + retrieve pollutant data from the U.S. Environmental Protection + Agency’s 'Air Quality System' (AQS) API service + for + interactive visualization through a 'shiny' application, allowing + users to explore pollutant levels for a given location over time + relative to the National Ambient Air Quality Standards (NAAQS). License: BSD_3_clause + file LICENSE Encoding: UTF-8 Roxygen: list(markdown = TRUE) @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ Imports: stats, utils Depends: - R (>= 4.0.0) + R (>= 4.1.0) LazyData: true Suggests: knitr, diff --git a/cran-comments.md b/cran-comments.md index 3a9e25d..5832799 100644 --- a/cran-comments.md +++ b/cran-comments.md @@ -1,12 +1,19 @@ ## Reviewer's comments: -The Description field should not start with the package name, 'This package' or -similar. +Please always write package names, software names and API (application +programming interface) names in single quotes in title and description. +e.g: --> 'Air Quality System' API +Please note that package names are case sensitive. -> 'shiny' -Note that your package is called pargasite, not PARGASITE +- We added single quotes for Air Quality System API +- We changed 'Shiny' -> 'shiny' -- We updated the description field based on reviewer's comment +Please add a web reference for the API in the form <[https:.....]https:.....> to +the description of the DESCRIPTION file with no space after 'https:' and angle +brackets for auto-linking. +- We added a web reference for the API with angle brackets in the DESCRIPTION + file. ## Test environments diff --git a/man/pargasite-package.Rd b/man/pargasite-package.Rd index 7a16af1..55f1055 100644 --- a/man/pargasite-package.Rd +++ b/man/pargasite-package.Rd @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ \alias{pargasite-package} \title{pargasite: Pollution-Associated Risk Geospatial Analysis Site} \description{ -This package offers tools to estimate and visualize levels of major pollutants (CO, NO2, SO2, Ozone, PM2.5 and PM10) across the conterminous United States for user-defined time ranges. It provides functions to retrieve pollutant data from the Environmental Protection Agency’s (EPA) Air Quality System (AQS) API service for interactive visualization through a 'Shiny' application, allowing users to explore pollutant levels for a given location over time relative to the National Ambient Air Quality Standards (NAAQS). +Offers tools to estimate and visualize levels of major pollutants (CO, NO2, SO2, Ozone, PM2.5 and PM10) across the conterminous United States for user-defined time ranges. Provides functions to retrieve pollutant data from the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency’s 'Air Quality System' (AQS) API service \url{https://aqs.epa.gov/aqsweb/documents/data_api.html} for interactive visualization through a 'shiny' application, allowing users to explore pollutant levels for a given location over time relative to the National Ambient Air Quality Standards (NAAQS). } \author{ \strong{Maintainer}: Jaehyun Joo \email{jaehyunjoo@outlook.com} diff --git a/vignettes/PARGASITE.Rmd b/vignettes/PARGASITE.Rmd index 1c11845..4204a5a 100644 --- a/vignettes/PARGASITE.Rmd +++ b/vignettes/PARGASITE.Rmd @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ --- -title: "Getting Started" +title: "Interactive Visualization of Major Pollutant Levels in the United States" output: rmarkdown::html_vignette vignette: > - %\VignetteIndexEntry{Getting Started} + %\VignetteIndexEntry{Interactive Visualization of Major Pollutant Levels in the United States} %\VignetteEngine{knitr::rmarkdown} %\VignetteEncoding{UTF-8} --- @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if (!requireNamespace("raqs", quietly = TRUE)) { } library(raqs) -## Please use your eamil address to create an account +## Please use your email address to create an account ## A verification email wille be sent to the eamil account speficied. aqs_signup('youremail@address.com')