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 # Markdown Oxide
 
-Implementing Obsidian PKM features (and possibly more) in the form of a language server allows us to use these features in our favorite text editors and reuse other LSP-related plugins (like Telescope, outline, refactoring tools, ...). This language server primarily attempts to be a replacement and extension to the Obsidian markdown editor for Obsidian vault PKM-ing in your favorite text editing system -- creating the best PKM system for any text editor. 
+Markdown Oxide is attempting to be the best PKM system for software enthusiasts - people like me who are addicted to creating the best text editing experience. 
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+Markdown Oxide's PKM features are strongly inspired by both Obsidian and Logseq. They are implemented in the form of a language server aiming to be fully compatible with your favorite text editor and its ecosystem. Read on to learn what Markdown Oxide provides. 
 
 ## Installation