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Chap 4 - Grammar, too many and connectors #17

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rodoviario opened this issue Jul 29, 2017 · 0 comments

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rodoviario commented Jul 29, 2017

In the line 9 there is a sentence which enumerates 3 things using "and" two times (instead of a comma)

"filterable by business goals and audience interests and goals."

Could be:

filterable by business goals, audience interests and goals.

or if you mean only two options, then

filterable by business goals or audience interests and goals.

Using cursive to consolidate the two entities

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