From 54221abf1bf48897b9ddd0e7df1d82079089437e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sacha Greif <sacha357@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 10 Nov 2014 14:32:22 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] more small tweaks

---
 02-getting-started.md.erb | 4 ++--
 06-adding-users.md.erb    | 2 +-
 07-creating-posts.md.erb  | 2 +-
 10-comments.md.erb        | 4 ++--
 11-notifications.md.erb   | 4 ++--
 12-pagination.md.erb      | 2 +-
 b-changelog.md.erb        | 1 +
 7 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/02-getting-started.md.erb b/02-getting-started.md.erb
index 265a0a4..b436f19 100644
--- a/02-getting-started.md.erb
+++ b/02-getting-started.md.erb
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Now point your browser to `http://localhost:3000/` (or the equivalent `http://0.
 
 Congratulations! You've got your first Meteor app running. By the way, to stop the app all you need to do is bring up the terminal tab where the app is running, and press `ctrl+c`.
 
-Also, note that if you're using Git, this is a good time to initialize your repo with `git init`.
+Also note that if you're using Git, this is a good time to initialize your repo with `git init`.
 
 <% note do %>
 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ Also, note that if you're using Git, this is a good time to initialize your repo
 
 There was a time where Meteor relied on an external package manager called Meteorite. Since Meteor version 0.9.0, Meteorite is not needed anymore since its features have been assimilated into Meteor itself.
 
-So, if you encounter any references to Meteorite's `mrt` command line utility throughout this book or while browsing Meteor-related material, you can safely replace them by the usual `meteor`.
+So if you encounter any references to Meteorite's `mrt` command line utility throughout this book or while browsing Meteor-related material, you can safely replace them by the usual `meteor`.
 
 <% end %>
 
diff --git a/06-adding-users.md.erb b/06-adding-users.md.erb
index e955c93..020f276 100644
--- a/06-adding-users.md.erb
+++ b/06-adding-users.md.erb
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ meteor add accounts-password
 
 Those two commands make the special accounts templates available to us, and we can include them in our site using the `{{> loginButtons}}` helper. A handy tip: you can control on which side your log-in dropdown shows up using the `align` attribute (for example: `{{> loginButtons  align="right"}}`).
 
-We'll add the buttons to our header. And since that header is starting to grow larger, let's give it more room in its own template (we'll put it in `client/templates/includes/`). We're also using some extra markup and Bootstrap classes to make sure everything looks nice:
+We'll add the buttons to our header. And since that header is starting to grow larger, let's give it more room in its own template (we'll put it in `client/templates/includes/`). We're also using some extra markup and classes [as specified by Bootstrap](http://getbootstrap.com/components/#navbar) to make sure everything looks nice:
 
 ~~~html
 <template name="layout">
diff --git a/07-creating-posts.md.erb b/07-creating-posts.md.erb
index cad68a1..b9523fe 100644
--- a/07-creating-posts.md.erb
+++ b/07-creating-posts.md.erb
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ Meteor.methods({
   }
 });
 ~~~
-<%= caption "collections/posts.js" %>
+<%= caption "lib/collections/posts.js" %>
 <%= highlight "3~24" %>
 
 Note that the `_.extend()` method is part of the [Underscore](http://underscorejs.org) library, and simply lets you “extend” one object with the properties of another. 
diff --git a/10-comments.md.erb b/10-comments.md.erb
index cf9826d..3d77543 100644
--- a/10-comments.md.erb
+++ b/10-comments.md.erb
@@ -259,8 +259,6 @@ And then create the comment form template:
 ~~~
 <%= caption "client/templates/comments/comment_submit.html" %>
 
-<%= screenshot "10-2", "The comment submit form" %>
-
 To submit our comments, we call a `comment` Method in `comment_submit.js` that operates in a similar way to what we did for submitting posts:
 
 ~~~js
@@ -341,6 +339,8 @@ Meteor.methods({
 
 This is not doing anything too fancy, just checking that the user is logged in, that the comment has a body, and that it's linked to a post.
 
+<%= screenshot "10-2", "The comment submit form" %>
+
 ### Controlling the Comments Subscription
 
 As things stand, we are publishing all comments across all posts to all connected clients. That seems a little wasteful. After all, we're only actually using a small subset of this data at any given time. So let's improve our publication and subscription to control exactly which comments are published.
diff --git a/11-notifications.md.erb b/11-notifications.md.erb
index ba9c150..a9dab5e 100644
--- a/11-notifications.md.erb
+++ b/11-notifications.md.erb
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ To do so, we'll notify the post's owner that there's been a comment on their pos
 
 This is the kind of feature where Meteor really shines: because Meteor is realtime by default, we'll be displaying those notifications _instantly_. We don't need to wait for the user to refresh the page or check in any way, we can simply pop new notifications up without ever writing any special code. 
 
-### Creating notifications
+### Creating Notifications
 
 We'll create a notification when someone comments on your posts. In the future, notifications could be extended to cover many other scenarios, but for now this will be enough to keep users informed of what's going on.
 
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ We are already creating comments in a server-side Method, so we can just augment
 Comments = new Mongo.Collection('comments');
 
 Meteor.methods({
-  comment: function(commentAttributes) {
+  commentInsert: function(commentAttributes) {
 
     //...
     
diff --git a/12-pagination.md.erb b/12-pagination.md.erb
index 000977a..8a67b71 100644
--- a/12-pagination.md.erb
+++ b/12-pagination.md.erb
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ We have a working pagination, and our code is looking good. There's just one pro
 
 What we want to do is simple enough. We'll add a “load more” button at the bottom of our posts list, which will increment the number of posts currently displayed by 5 every time it's clicked. So if I'm currently on the URL `http://localhost:3000/5`, clicking “load more” should bring me to `http://localhost:3000/10`. If you've made it this far in the book, we trust you can handle a little arithmetic!
 
-As before, we'll add our pagination logic in our route. Remember when we explicitely named our data context rather than just use an anonymous cursor? Well, there's no rule that says the `data` function can only pass cursors, so we'll use the same technique to generate the URL of our “load more” button.
+As before, we'll add our pagination logic in our route. Remember when we explicitly named our data context rather than just use an anonymous cursor? Well, there's no rule that says the `data` function can only pass cursors, so we'll use the same technique to generate the URL of our “load more” button.
 
 ~~~js
 //...
diff --git a/b-changelog.md.erb b/b-changelog.md.erb
index 17f4ddd..20020af 100644
--- a/b-changelog.md.erb
+++ b/b-changelog.md.erb
@@ -17,6 +17,7 @@ Various fixes.
 - Fix code highlighting in Voting chapter.
 - Change “router” to “route” in Pagination chapter.
 - Removed mentions of `Router.map()` in Comments and Pagination chapters.
+- Linking to Boostrap site in Adding Users chapter. 
 
 ### October 28, 2014 <span class="marker version-marker">1.7</span>