Feedback from Covey on v0.6+ paper draft

[gully]

paraphrased

• Description of Triplespec data observations
• Improve abstract with specific feedback
• Emphasize point about veiled lines from (relatively) featureless portions of starspot spectrum
• Clarify discussion of which orders were discarded and why
• Enhance the discussion section with specific feedback
• More specific feedback in marked-up draft

[gully]

• Explicitly show the equation leading to Teff calculation

[gully]

• More support for this claim:

  Temperature uncertainties for young K and M dwarfs are larger than any formal uncertainties in individual measurements.

[gully]

I didn't exactly clarify why I tossed which orders, but the referee wanted less jargon and less methods, so I chose not to expand (in fact, I might have cut more). All the jupyter notebooks will be open source, so folks can see the raw data.

Note to self: I'm not sure if I got to all the discussion section comments... might be worth double checking these, since I remember them being good.