tp DG review

[bdthanh]

Hi W13-4! Please find below some suggestions I have. For convenience, I have made a checklist:

• Missing colon for entities in sequence diagrams

• Consider adding labels and multiplicities for associations in class diagrams

• Consider remove the parameter names in methods, and keeping the types of that params only and removing some unimportant method from class diagrams to reduce complexity.

• Consider following the UML standard notation for class diagrams (removing the circle next to class names, using + - ~ for visibilities,...)

• Consider adding more diagrams to show the architecture, as well as the different components of your application and how they interact with one another.

• Consider adding the activation bar for sequence diagrams

• Consider adding an architecture diagram to explain the high level structure/architecture of your application.

Hope this helps! Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.